in Helsinki
June 30th, 2008
hello hello,
are you there, are you there?
cos' if you are,
it is true i'm in despair.
my house is now ashes,
and my things are burnt,
I have one tiny question and I'm sure it will not hurt;
can I live with you and your nice family?
until I buy a little cottage with a tree,
so that is my question,
will you grant my wish?
let me here a yes and i'll be as happy as a fish.....
(drum roll)
no! stop pretending to be a widdow and go to bed!
aw dad.....
NO!!!!!

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Interesting Pardoy. Work on
Interesting Pardoy. Work on typos.
Cool poem though.
There are three rules for writing a wonderful novel. Unfortunally, no one knows what they are.
Poetry is when your heart bleeds ink on paper.
Charles! you're back! yay!
Charles! you're back! yay! loved the poem, by the way!
"The elephant walks at dawn," whispered the sheriff knowingly. "He's catching the 5 o'clock to Albuquerque."
This is an awesome poem with
This is an awesome poem with twists of sarcasm and wit! Fantastic!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "I'll never tell. You know that. I'll threaten, but never tell." My best friend, "Doe"
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Why are you embaressed? It's
Why are you embaressed? It's a good poem.
There are three rules for writing a wonderful novel. Unfortunally, no one knows what they are.
Poetry is when your heart bleeds ink on paper.
i'm embarrsed because
i'm embarrsed because Claudia said 'yay, your back!' (but she still has always been kind to me.)