hello?

by Charles
in Helsinki

June 30th, 2008

hello hello,

are you there, are you there?

cos' if you are,

it is true i'm in despair.

my house is now ashes,

and my things are burnt,

I have one tiny question and I'm sure it will not hurt;

can I live with you and your nice family?

until I buy a little cottage with a tree,

so that is my question,

will you grant my wish?

let me here a yes and i'll be as happy as a fish.....

(drum roll)

no! stop pretending to be a widdow and go to bed!

aw dad..... 

NO!!!!!

Innocent


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