Home
in Arizona
January 31st, 2012
I have no home.
I will make one.
A home for the poor.
A home for the sick.
A home for the unlucky.
A home for the homeless.
A home for the dreamers.
A home for the hopeful.
A home for the depressed.
A home.
A real home.
A home where I will be respected.
A home where I will be loved.
A home where everyone is respected.
And everyone is loved.
Be kind there.
Be loving there.
Be caring there.
Be at home there.
Come home.
Come home to us.
Come home to where we are waiting.
We are waiting for you.
We are waiting to help you carry the burdan of your troubles.
We are willing to cry with you; to laugh with you.
We will stick together.
We live in this home.
We will stay in this home until we die.
We love eachother.
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You know, it's hard to explain a really good piece of writing when the words "amazing", "awesome", and "fantastic" are used in almost every single comment, along with multiple exclamation points. This is wonderful.
I love the poetic-ness of this... In my mind, it seems like it's a whisper. And like it's calling to the person reading, by the end.
I think, you'll do it, Lily. And it will be a haven for a lot of people.
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*laughs in insane relief* "It's real..." *more confidently* "It's real! It's REAL!" *flies to a different place* "All these years, you thought I was mad. King of the Wasteland! But something is calling me, Doctor, what is it?! WHAT IS IT?!"
Aw! So sweet! :) awesome job capturing the emotion behind it! :)
TEAM PERRY!!!
Beautiful!! I will be favoriting!! You're an amazing writer!!
This isn't my best poetry cause I was just sorta venting. :P But thanks for all the coompliments/comments anyways. :) *hugs everyone who commented in one giant supermega hug and streches her arms to an enourmous length in the process* Erm... :P
This isn't your best??? I've gotta start reading more poetry!