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I gave you my heart

I gave you my heart

by Harry
in Cheshire

March 17th, 2010

I offered you my heart

you so kindly refused

It stops when we're apart

My life is dark and bruised

my inside feels broken

but whole when you are near

Words I left unspoken

transparent as a tear


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I like it, espesially the

I like it, espesially the "the words I left unspoken transparent as a tear" part :D Keep it up dude!! :D

Every person's life is a fairytale written by God's fingers ~ Hans Christian Anderson

Posted by De-Ecrivian on Wed, 03/17/2010 - 17:53
Yeah, this is so cool! I

Yeah, this is so cool! I emailed it to a few of my friends! ^^

 

~*Serenity*~

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Posted by Ashley on Wed, 03/17/2010 - 18:36
This is sooo good! *A good

This is sooo good!

*A good friend helps you up when you fall down. A best friend laughs at you until you stand up and then trips you* ~ my awesome friends

95% would cry if they saw ROBERT PATTINSON (Edward Cullen - Twilight, New Moon) standing on top of a sky scraper about to jump. If you're one of the 5% who would sit there eating pop corn saying "DO A FRONTFLIP!!" copy this and paste it in your sig

Posted by Twirlgirl on Wed, 03/17/2010 - 19:36
Awe It's very sweet. A bit

AweCry It's very sweet. A bit predictable, but it still gets to the reader Tongue out Very fluent, I like your poetry style!

 

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Posted by Lone Wolf on Thu, 03/18/2010 - 13:49
I love poetry.....its soooo

I love poetry.....its soooo dramatic. I like dramatic things.......you are excellent

 

95% would cry if they saw ROBERT PATTINSON (Edward Cullen - Twilight, New Moon) standing on top of a sky scraper about to jump. If you're one of the 5% who would sit there eating pop corn saying "DO A FRONTFLIP!!" copy this and paste it in your signat

Posted by Rebecca on Fri, 04/16/2010 - 10:56
This is a great poem! It's

This is a great poem! It's so fluent! I luv it!

 

You can be you want to be. No one has the Stop sign to your destiny. Be free to be you.

Posted by Crazy 8 on Sun, 04/18/2010 - 14:21


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