I gave you my heart
by Harry
in Cheshire
March 17th, 2010
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in Cheshire
March 17th, 2010
I offered you my heart
you so kindly refused
It stops when we're apart
My life is dark and bruised
my inside feels broken
but whole when you are near
Words I left unspoken
transparent as a tear
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I like it, espesially the "the words I left unspoken transparent as a tear" part :D Keep it up dude!! :D
Every person's life is a fairytale written by God's fingers ~ Hans Christian Anderson
Yeah, this is so cool! I emailed it to a few of my friends! ^^
~*Serenity*~
"You can't burn love. Love can only burn you." -Unknown
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This is sooo good!
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It's very sweet. A bit predictable, but it still gets to the reader
Very fluent, I like your poetry style!
'By carrying a cat by its tail the man learns something he can't any other way.' - Mark Twain
I love poetry.....its soooo dramatic. I like dramatic things.......you are excellent
95% would cry if they saw ROBERT PATTINSON (Edward Cullen - Twilight, New Moon) standing on top of a sky scraper about to jump. If you're one of the 5% who would sit there eating pop corn saying "DO A FRONTFLIP!!" copy this and paste it in your signat
This is a great poem! It's so fluent! I luv it!
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