Just Athena~A Poem
| by
Ninja Cat in the flesh >:) |
January 30th, 2012
AN: It's
BEEN
SO
LONG
But I was surfing the interwebs and I saw "Athena" written somewhere.
And because my brain makes SO much sense it said, "POETRY. NOW."
And then I wrote in about twenty mintues, posted it on Kidpub....
Which brings me to here.
PLEASE COMMENT~! :D
(to be honest I should be using this creative burst on Hatter's poem, but I break my own rules :D. KRTW IS TAKING OVER MY LIFE.)
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JUST ATHENA
I came into this world
Thrashing
Screaming
Raging
To get out
So don’t expect me
To be gentle
Or kind
Or loving
You never asked me
To be kind
It’s so easy
To hold the shield
And the sword
So much easier
Than holding something
Delicate
Like your heart
In my hands
I will fight for you
I will die for you
But never
Never ask me to love you
Because I will destroy you
Not on purpose
Of course
But with my hands like
Clubs
And my words like knives…
I can
I can tear you apart
I’m not sure
If the gods wanted me that way
But
That’s how it is
I’m not a wild beauty
I’m the wild beast
Not fit for something as
Refined as love or care…
Or you
I’m not supposed
To want
Anything
I’m not supposed
To feel pain
But sometimes I do
Don’t tell anyone
Okay?
Or I might have
To kill you
If I can’t touch it
If I can’t hold it
Then
How does it exist?
How does it make me hurt?
How does it stop me?
Because it does
And somehow
I know it’s killing me
From the inside out
So I’ll fight for you
And just like
I was born
I’ll die angrily
Thrashing
And screaming
To win a losing battle
As the armor falls away
And all that’s left
Is a girl
I hope you take this as a warning.
We’re all children
In adult armor
We’re all lovers
With everything to lose
And we’re all fighting
For something
You just don’t know it yet.
“Let me tell you the story of Athena.”
“Athena the warrior?”
“No…just Athena.”
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I love those last three stanzas… ;_;
YOUR MIND GEtS AN AWARD FOR MAKING THIS POEM. *Gives your brain a ribbon*
The flow is awesome… The Athena in this poem is epik. ^_^
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Ahhh! Like someone said before, the last three sentences make the poem fall perfectly together. LOVE IT!! Faved.
I LOVE THE LAST THREE STANZAS TOO! WHAT A COINCIDENCE!
Not really a coincidence. It's just because the last three stanzas are epyk. I'm not saying the other stanzas are not epyk too, but the last three stanzas are the most epykal. But I think the last stanza was the epykawesomesauceest!
Just Athena...
No, ^that's the epykawesomesupercalifragilisticexpialidotioustooawesomeforwordsevenaninvisibletrophywon'tdogoodenough! It's amazing how two words have such an AH-MAZE-ING effect.
~Lauren~
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