Mirror Miss
by A. B. Labelle (Abby)
in the gym, like always
January 8th, 2011
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in the gym, like always
January 8th, 2011
She is a mirror
Her surface glassy
Beautiful at first look
But if you stare
Just hard enough
Or if you gaze
For long enough
You'll see that she has took
What all the world
Has shown to her
And thrown it back again
And everything
You see is stolen
Looks to clothes to friends
Everything
You know of her
Came from someone else
The only one
That you don't know
The only one
She doesn't show
The one that even
She barely knows
Is herself
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Amazing concept, this was really beautiful and the only CC I have is on this line,
"Looks to clothes to friends."
Did you mean
"Looks to friends for clothes"?
Either way, this is magnificent (faves)
Kiki:(after Red Queen has a hysterical fit of laughter) Am I missing something?
Neina:I think SHE'S missing something...
Thanks, but i actually meant "From looks to clothes to friends" as in those are all lies.
thanks for catching that!
Abby=) "I'm not random, I just think faster than you do"~ My gifted class teacher
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hhmmm.. i like this poem! faving this!
That is really good. Makes me think...
Reminds me of steriotypical poular girls in those teen movies...
xD