My band's 1st song! Please Comment!
in Cheshire
April 8th, 2010
This is the first song that I wrote for my band! Please Comment:
[Chorus]
I can’t decide so you’ve been put on hold
Should I gamble or should I fold
There’s a battle raging inside my head,
But you couldn’t tell
(No you couldn’t tell)
‘Cause I hide it well
(Yeah I hide it well)
I bury it deep deep down inside
Feel like I’ve always gotta hide
It’s like a contest,
Always competing
To see who’s the best
It’s just not fair
Neither of you
Are even aware
I’ve got to decide
And I’m so sorry
But I lied
[Chorus]
I can’t decide so you’ve been put on hold
Should I gamble or should I fold
There’s a battle raging inside my head,
But you couldn’t tell
(No you couldn’t tell)
‘Cause I hide it well
(Yeah I hide it well)
I bury it deep deep down inside
Feel like I’ve always gotta hide
All by myself
All on my own
And I wonder
Should I go home
Edit: My band's second song can be found here:
http://www.kidpub.com/story/my-bands-second-song-reeeeeead-and-comment-54976029#new
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I love it! Great lyrics!
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OMGeeeeeeee!
that's awesome! I've tried songs o.O I suck at them
Would love to hear your band though! Can you record them or something?
'By carrying a cat by its tail the man learns something he can't any other way.' - Mark Twain
I agree!!!! OMG! the lyrics r rockin'!!!!
95% would cry if they saw ROBERT PATTINSON (Edward Cullen - Twilight, New Moon) standing on top of a sky scraper about to jump. If you're one of the 5% who would sit there eating pop corn saying "DO A FRONTFLIP!!" copy this and paste it in your signature
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(: This is my signature. Don't you love it? :)
I liked it it was really kewl
If I'm crazy... what are you???
KOOLNESS!!! It's gonna be a rock song, right? It'd sound great with lotsa drumming and electric guitar :D
Every person's life is a fairytale written by God's fingers ~ Hans Christian Anderson
GREAT!!!! The lyrics were sooo good! Keep doing a awesome job
95% would cry if they saw ROBERT PATTINSON (Edward Cullen - Twilight, New Moon) standing on top of a sky scraper about to jump. If you're one of the 5% who would sit there eating pop corn saying "DO A FRONTFLIP!!" copy this and paste it in your signature
Yeah Its a rock song :) Thanks for the comments.
Your in the United Kingdom? I didn't know KidPub even existed there! Shows how much I know...
face it, i'm a mystery...
I thought KP was based in England... And couldn't peeps from anywhere in the world join?
Every person's life is a fairytale written by God's fingers ~ Hans Christian Anderson
Yes, I'm in Africa for example... (South Africa that is xP)
There used to be a map on the side bar with little dots pointing out where different people live. I wonder what happened to it :?
'By carrying a cat by its tail the man learns something he can't any other way.' - Mark Twain
I remember that; lol, I didn't notice that it was gone until now XD
Every person's life is a fairytale written by God's fingers ~ Hans Christian Anderson
That is soooo awesome! I can sing but when i write songs the are REALLY bad. But this was just awesome! Keep writing. 95% would cry if they saw ROBERT PATTINSON (Edward Cullen - Twilight, New Moon) standing on top of a sky scraper about to jump. If you're one of the 5% who would sit there eating pop corn saying "DO A FRONTFLIP!!" copy this and paste it in your sig
I'd love to hear it if I could
the songs rock
I'M A SONGWRITER, BUT I'VE HEARD (FROM FAMILY) THAT I SUCK WHEN I SING! OH, THE IRONY...
(: Light shines within you :)
really great! i love it!!!