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From My Window

From My Window

Serenity's picture
by Ashley
in a balloon; the only way is up.

August 28th, 2010

 

From my window

I saw a handsome, strong man

His hair as beautiful as a lion’s golden mane

And his smile as stunning as a dimond.

When I went outside to greet him

it turned out he was actually a

scary, deformed man

lacking of affectionate, not admiring, love of which he desired.

 

From my window

I saw a friendly, smart woman

Her intellectual voice was able to paint colors into the dull air

And her kindness able to warm hearts.

When I went outside to greet her

It turned out she was actually a

hateful, clumsy child

that grew too fast for her age.

 

From my window

I see glorious things

But when I go outside

It falls into disappointment

 

From my window

I do not trust everything I see.

 

-Ashley

 

 


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It's good, but I'm never

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Posted by Alex (A. Tedford) on Sat, 08/28/2010 - 17:27
Awesome job!!!! I love

Awesome job!!!! I love it!

 

 

~Kay

Posted by Kay on Sat, 08/28/2010 - 17:39
Very good! I liked the

Very good! I liked the message!

Posted by Sindu on Sat, 08/28/2010 - 18:21
Lol Alex xD Thanks guys!!!

Lol Alex xD Thanks guys!!! :D

 

~*Serenity*~

"Friends are like flowers; if you care and tend to them patiently, they'll bloom for you."

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Posted by Ashley on Sat, 08/28/2010 - 18:56
Coool! I'm glad that all you

Coool! I'm glad that all you can see from my window is woods, the mountains, the chicken house, and the sunset. Awesome job, it's pretty and profound. (don't you just love that word? profound...)

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World domination! You make it sound so unattainable.

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Posted by Athena on Sun, 08/29/2010 - 16:29


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