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Nobody Sees

Nobody Sees

Posted January 29th, 2011 by GabiDi

by Pandora
in ception. (you're waiting for a train. BA-BAM. Oh, I shame myself.)

January 29th, 2011

Nobody Sees

 

She never cries,

But is that an excuse?

Nobody pries,

They think it's no use.

If they were to try it,

She'd tell them her pain,

But instead she stays quiet,

To a haunting refrain

Of wailing, swearing,

And all that she's heard.

Red eyes are glaring,

Her world is blurred.

Nobody sees, nobody cares,

But then, nobody looks,

Nobody comes to answer her prayers

So she buries her head in books.

 

If they could have been there,

Then are they to blame?

Did they never care,

Or think she was the same?

Or did they know,

And yet just keep going?

Although long ago

They'd've cried at the knowing.

Years have passed

Ignorance has fled,

And all that could last,

Hearts, souls are dead.

They only care for one,

And that's always them.

That way they'll have won

So they keep their souls prim.

Nobody heard, nobody thought,

But then, nobody listened.

Nobody knew of the battles she fought

Or of the tears that glistened,

In all the days

That she sat alone

Hoping it was just a faze,

But she should've known.

 

She'd construct a wall

Around her heart

So she'd never fall

Or be torn apart,

But instead it betrayed

And stabbed with a knife,

All the times she'd prayed

Just ruined her life.

So she'd never show

What nobody sees

And they'd never know,

That they'd broken her pleas...

 

If nobody heard, was it their fault?

If nobody saw, are they to blame?

For they broke her heart

When nobody came...


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YET ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL POEM

YET ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL POEM THAT DESERVES CAPS LOCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D I LOVE THE ENDING AND THE RHYMES!!!!!! :D
My only CC is that you have a typo right here:

She never cires,

That, and I… (*Sobs*) TURNED SERIOUS IN THIS COMMENT!!!! HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO BE SANE WHEN CONFRONTED WITH SUCH AWESOMENESS!?!?!?!? HOW!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!!?!?!????!!! :P

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Posted by L. S. Tredom on Sat, 01/29/2011 - 21:32
By doing nothing, they fail

By doing nothing, they fail to see the truth
Remind me to read more of your poetry, it's absolutely stunning (faves)

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Neina:I think SHE'S missing something...

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Posted by Ninja Cat on Sat, 01/29/2011 - 21:40
Whoa, amazingness!!!!!! 

Whoa, amazingness!!!!!! 

Posted by Soquel on Sat, 01/29/2011 - 21:55
I absolutely LOVE This

I absolutely LOVE This poem!!! its equal to all your other amazing poems! i havent come across one that hasnt made me feel so much! I LOVE This! keep on writing!

 

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Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby.

Oh and...May the odds be ever in your favor...

Posted by Roya on Sat, 01/29/2011 - 21:59
Wow.  This is REALLY

Wow.  This is REALLY beautiful and sad.  It reminds me of myself from two years ago.  GREAT job!

 

My only CC:

 

She never cires

 

the word highlighted should be cries.

 

Other than that, TOTALLY AWESOME POEM!!!!!!!!!

 

 

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Posted by shimmeringwrite... on Sat, 01/29/2011 - 22:07
Thank you everyone! I've

Thank you everyone! I've corrected the errors now. :)

 

 

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Posted by -Athena... on Sat, 01/29/2011 - 22:13
Oh. my god. This is like, so

Oh. my god. This is like, so amazing. I've never heard anything lke it before. Oh. my. god. The meaning... the way you say it... Oh. my. god. 

 

 

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Posted by Amy on Sat, 01/29/2011 - 23:20
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ATHENA this is AMAZING!!!!! ABSOLUTLY AMAZING!!!

 

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Posted by Kay on Sat, 01/29/2011 - 23:28
i really, really love this.

i really, really love this. Thank you :) it was what i was feeling but could never find the words to say.. :) </3

Posted by Emma on Sun, 01/30/2011 - 01:13
How can something this

How can something this COMPLETELY AWESOME even be real?!  Even though it is!  Bravo!  Keep writing!  I love this poem.  

WRITE ON!!!!!!!!

 

Posted by Issabella on Sun, 01/30/2011 - 10:54
WOW! This is beautiful and

WOW! This is beautiful and totally awesome!! You're amazing when it comes to writing! I could never write a poem as good as this! I loved it! It's really...unique! Love, Love, Loved it!!!! You're style of writing is my FAVORITE here on Kidpub. No lie. It's really amazing!!! Great job!

 

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