Nobody Sees
Posted January 29th, 2011 by GabiDi
in ception. (you're waiting for a train. BA-BAM. Oh, I shame myself.)
January 29th, 2011
Nobody Sees
She never cries,
But is that an excuse?
Nobody pries,
They think it's no use.
If they were to try it,
She'd tell them her pain,
But instead she stays quiet,
To a haunting refrain
Of wailing, swearing,
And all that she's heard.
Red eyes are glaring,
Her world is blurred.
Nobody sees, nobody cares,
But then, nobody looks,
Nobody comes to answer her prayers
So she buries her head in books.
If they could have been there,
Then are they to blame?
Did they never care,
Or think she was the same?
Or did they know,
And yet just keep going?
Although long ago
They'd've cried at the knowing.
Years have passed
Ignorance has fled,
And all that could last,
Hearts, souls are dead.
They only care for one,
And that's always them.
That way they'll have won
So they keep their souls prim.
Nobody heard, nobody thought,
But then, nobody listened.
Nobody knew of the battles she fought
Or of the tears that glistened,
In all the days
That she sat alone
Hoping it was just a faze,
But she should've known.
She'd construct a wall
Around her heart
So she'd never fall
Or be torn apart,
But instead it betrayed
And stabbed with a knife,
All the times she'd prayed
Just ruined her life.
So she'd never show
What nobody sees
And they'd never know,
That they'd broken her pleas...
If nobody heard, was it their fault?
If nobody saw, are they to blame?
For they broke her heart
When nobody came...
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YET ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL POEM THAT DESERVES CAPS LOCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D I LOVE THE ENDING AND THE RHYMES!!!!!! :D
My only CC is that you have a typo right here:
She never cires,
That, and I… (*Sobs*) TURNED SERIOUS IN THIS COMMENT!!!! HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO BE SANE WHEN CONFRONTED WITH SUCH AWESOMENESS!?!?!?!? HOW!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!!?!?!????!!! :P
Team Perry!
By doing nothing, they fail to see the truth
Remind me to read more of your poetry, it's absolutely stunning (faves)
Kiki:(after Red Queen has a hysterical fit of laughter) Am I missing something?
Neina:I think SHE'S missing something...
~Nya?~
Whoa, amazingness!!!!!!
I absolutely LOVE This poem!!! its equal to all your other amazing poems! i havent come across one that hasnt made me feel so much! I LOVE This! keep on writing!
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Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby.
Oh and...May the odds be ever in your favor...
Wow. This is REALLY beautiful and sad. It reminds me of myself from two years ago. GREAT job!
My only CC:
She never cires
the word highlighted should be cries.
Other than that, TOTALLY AWESOME POEM!!!!!!!!!
http://www.google.com/#hl=en&sa=X&ei=fQ49TYrBI43GsAOe56C5Aw&ved=0CBMQvwU...
Thank you everyone! I've corrected the errors now. :)
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ATHENA this is AMAZING!!!!! ABSOLUTLY AMAZING!!!
- Kay - Just because I am different, doesn't mean I'm weak. ~~Me~~
i really, really love this. Thank you :) it was what i was feeling but could never find the words to say.. :) </3
How can something this COMPLETELY AWESOME even be real?! Even though it is! Bravo! Keep writing! I love this poem.
WRITE ON!!!!!!!!
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