(Not Letting You) Ruin My Night
 | by
Max (The First) in where she feels like she belongs |
July 1st, 2011
Ya made me promises that you swore you'd always keep
when I started trusting you, you started loving me
everything seemed to fall right into place
One summer day right before the chapter of our lives
you call me up and tell me everything was a lie
right then I watched my world begin to change
I'm strong under pressure, sweet and on fire
the world is my oyster and the radio my choir
I pull on my boots and dance in the moonlight
Because I'm not letting you ruin my life
You used to have me over and kiss me like ya meant it
you'd hug me to pieces and laugh like you cared
then you couldn't even cry or even say it was over
while I sobbed on the other line.
I'm strong under pressure, sweet and on fire
the world is my oyster and the radio, my choir
my guitar doesn't lie and my friends are by my side
because I'm not letting you ruin my night
We had a love for the ages
thought we'd be together till we're sages
Either way you lied to me
I'm sure you now know
I've cried the last of my tears for youuuuu
I'm strong under pressure, sweet, and on fire
the world is my oyster and the radio, my choir
I'm too good for you and I deserve better
So I'm done letting you ruin my night!
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Dude, this is such a good song!!!!!!! Your song writing skills are amazing, just the words and rhymes you have in there just make it all come together :) great job and WRITE ON!
WHO IS THE MOST AWESOMECOOLASTICALL WRITER EVAH?? I'LL TELL YA ONE OF THEM: SICILIAN SEA!!!! THE WRITING IS SO BEAUTIFUL, DESCRIPTIVE AND TOUCHING, I GUARANTEE IT'LL MAKE YOUR HEART SMILE (OR CRY) SO READ SOME OF THE MOST AMAZING WRITING EVER< JUST CLICK
awesomecoolestical? i LOVE that word. min dif i borrow it for comments?
"i find television very educational; whenever someone turns it on, i leave the room and read."- Groucho Marx "Actually if a writer needs a dictionary he should not write. He should have read the dictionary at least three times from beginning to end and
Haha, no I don't mind at all, use it as much as you want!
WHO IS THE MOST AWESOMECOOLASTICALL WRITER EVAH?? I'LL TELL YA ONE OF THEM: SICILIAN SEA!!!! THE WRITING IS SO BEAUTIFUL, DESCRIPTIVE AND TOUCHING, I GUARANTEE IT'LL MAKE YOUR HEART SMILE (OR CRY) SO READ SOME OF THE MOST AMAZING WRITING EVER< JUST CLICK
Wow, this is great! Pretty bold too, I wish that I could speak up like this. (Well, it might not be an actual situation for you, but still.) This could seriously be on the radio!
"Come to the dark side. We have cookies."-Bumper Sticker
It's pretty real believe it or not...lol I don't think I could write like this if it wasn't.
"It's Not Weird! It's Different!"
COOLEFERSLENIFESCENT song/poem. i really like your idea!
"i find television very educational; whenever someone turns it on, i leave the room and read."- Groucho Marx "Actually if a writer needs a dictionary he should not write. He should have read the dictionary at least three times from beginning to end and
This is so good! you got some major skills!