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Not Tree Climbing

Not Tree Climbing

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by Clarissa
in the middle of the road, staring at a pretty bird

September 6th, 2010

 

Her shoes are gray and worn

And just a bit too big

They stand awkwardly upon the rough branch

Shivering as she hugs the trunk of

This tree

 

I've never climbed a tree before

She admits, and I say that's fine

There's a first time for everything

And you can see

The world from here. Isn't it beautiful?

 

And she says yes

Because they taught her lying in school

Not tree climbing

 

I nod, like I believe her, and she asks

Can I go down now?

 

And I suppose she finds

It disconcerting to see the world

Spread out like a map. Flat

And far too easy to see where you're heading

 


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I love this! My favorite is

I love this! My favorite is the third stanza. So true!

*~Mac~* Whenever I'm about to do something, I think, "Would an idiot do that?" And if they would, I do not do that thing.~ Dwight Schrute

Posted by Mac & Nicole on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 14:07
Wow. That was really awesome

Wow. That was really awesome and metaphorical :) everyone LOOOVES metaphors! :D I feel like I can barely see the real meaning, but i just don't know what it is. But I guess I can say this, I'VE NEVER CLIMBED A TREE IN MY LIFE! :D

Kiki:(after Red Queen has a hysterical fit of laughter) Am I missing something?

Neina:I think SHE'S missing something...

Posted by Ninja Cat on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 16:32


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