Our Star
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Ninja Cat in the depths of Wonderland...trying to find a looking-glass portal out. |
August 23rd, 2010
AN:Nothing really for me to say on this poem...enjoy!
Our Star
As if they’re taunting me
The stars in the sky
Twinkle on and off
I’ll probably never find
The perfect answer
But I thought it was okay
Under the night sky we saw,
From that place
We promised each other
If you laugh,
I will laugh,
I’m happy with that choice!
Within the many sleepless nights
I wished that I could be with you
I connected the stars
With my fingertip,
Drawing out my dreams
Even if the light is very weak
It gets stronger,
When I think of you
If I look up at the sky
That star we found,
Is still blinking
I thought about you,
A thousand times
And it felt like I was all alone
This heart that just longs,
To be with you
Its silent wish will not be heard
If that star is you,
Then I will be
The star right next to it!
We will put my name,
And your name,
Together on that star!
During all those many sleepless nights
I wanted to be with you,
More than anything else
“A little longer,
I want to be by your side,
A little longer!”
I will turn your ever falling tears,
Into sparkling stars across the sky
Beside your shadowed silhouette
I saw a comet fall
From your eyes
I promise to escape
From sleepless nights,
And I will right this second
I will go to the
Ends of the earth
To hear you laugh again!
Even if that light is dying out
It gets stronger
When I think of you
If I look up at,
That sparkling sky,
The star we found that day,
Is still blinking
We’re always together, right?
So don’t cry…
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This is amazing! I love your poetry. I like that all of them end with italics, and I always love that part.
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Word domination! You make it sound so unattainable.
~Opal Koboi, Artemis Fowl
WOW!! That was really beautiful! I found this when I was reading the list of poems to find more poems for the FAVORITE POEM CATEGORY for the B!E!C!C!A Awards YOU ARE NOMINATED!!! :) :)
"Love is patient, love is kind, love means slowly losing your mind," Kevin from 27 dresses said, WRITE NOT FIGHT!!
wow, thanks :) I'm glad you guys like my poetry!
Kiki:(after Red Queen has a hysterical fit of laughter) Am I missing something?
Neina:I think SHE'S missing something...
the end is the best, as it almost always is. But the whole thing is epical greatness. *claps and whistles*