A peom i wrote a LONG time ago (yes, i was kinda mad then but whatever...) please read and comment....
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InkExchange in an unknown world, laying by Zavier while watching the stars from other worlds... |
July 26th, 2011
This whole time
It just occured to me that i've been lying to myself.
This whole time.
Yeah. I have.
I've been blind.
This whole time.
I mean, with everything that happened
I guess i never knew.
This whole time.
But i'm too late.
I figured it out too long.
But i knew
But i didn't.
All i figured out is that time is running out.
And i was still trapped.
Under my soul.
In the dark.
Wondering how to get out.
Not trying to help the others.
But only myself.
This whole time.
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I think this is good, but it's a little too vague and talking-to-myself-ey.
Wow that's really good. I wish I could write that good of poetry.. You should write lots more! As dark as that is!
I've always wanted to put a funny quote from my life into a sig. But there are to many and frankly they won't fit in the sig box!!
Dark and true...
*~ Over and Out ~*
- Lizzie! -
Haveyoueverbeenkidnappedbytwohugegoonsandtakentoamagnificantcitywhereyoursisterandfriendwerebrainwashedbythegovernment? No? Then read my story, The City!
wow guys and thx. Umm...your kinda right actually, this poem is kinda deep and vague (can't really tell you why, sorry) but for some reason, i just felt like posting it....wierd right?
~ It's not faith if you use your eyes... ~
I feel like this right now, but i could never describe it into words as beautifully as you just did! Great job!
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Imagination is wealth that cannot be stolen.
CUPCAKES ARE WANNA-BE MUFFINS!!!! -Chiaki
Really??? Wow. Thanks and i hope that this poem might help you out or at least make you feel that your not alone. :)
~ It's not faith if you use your eyes... ~
JAZMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINE!!!!!!!! You know how much I love your poems!! =-D
"Life is flawed, just like people and their hearts. It's a wonder how they can live without it...Like it never existed."--Anatole Blake (The Stages Chronicles)
lol, yeah i know. You were like the first person i showed them too. lol, you wern't kidding when you said that you would start each comment with "JAZMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINE!!!!!!"
~ It's not faith if you use your eyes... ~
No, no I wasn't ;-)
"Life is flawed, just like people and their hearts. It's a wonder how they can live without it...Like it never existed."--Anatole Blake (The Stages Chronicles)