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The Pigeon's Eggs and the Dragon that tried to Steal them book 1

The Pigeon's Eggs and the Dragon that tried to Steal them book 1

by Mrs. Lovello's Winning Writers
in South Carolina

October 9th, 2008

It was a beautiful spring day in the forest, and a mother pigeon was sitting on her eggs.  "My, am I hungry!"  she exclaimed.  she covered her eggs with leaves to keep hereggs warm, and set off to find food.  Hanging from a tree was a nice, ripe, apple.  She ate it, butwhen she went back home to her nest,She discovered that her eggs were missing! 


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Nice job. Building up

Nice job. Building up suspence? Just one tiny thing, capilization (sp?), make sure you have caps at the beginning of your sentences.

Posted by Cj on Fri, 10/10/2008 - 05:46
I can't change it because

I can't change it because the computer won't let me.  I am sorry that I cannot change it. 

Posted by Jaime on Fri, 10/10/2008 - 14:03
I can not wait to read more

I can not wait to read more of your story it sounds so good. I hope you will finish the book or chapter soon.

Posted by Jaime on Fri, 10/10/2008 - 14:15


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