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Plot Help? :) :) :)

Plot Help? :) :) :)

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by Sis
in Hogwarts, trying to figure out why everyone's staring at my new wand. *holds up a stick up dynamite*

September 6th, 2010

AHHH! How many times have I changed the plot for Ember Hope?!? Could you guys help me choose the plot that you would like best? I've been sticking with Plot B for a while, but I might change it to another plot. I'm thinking of Plot C, but if you could give me your opinion, I would be very grateful!


Background Info. So each and every one of these plots have one thing in common- Awakeners. The story is, that a long time ago there were huge mythological creatures called Ancients who roamed the earth (ten-story dragons, enormous phoenixes, etc.), that is until they fell into an eternal slumber. Their sleeping bodies created the mountains and valleys etc of the world. The Awakeners are a race of humans who can "wake up" these creatures by touching them.

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Plot A: I came up with this one this morning :)

Humans have always rejected the Awakeners as useless freaks and treated them with prejudice and ignorance. But the humans aren't the ones the Awakeners are running from. Cloaked half-demons called Banishers are constantly scourging for any Awakeners unlucky enough to run into them. They are notorious for dragging off their victims to some place north to their so-called "master". No one knows what they do with them. Thus, the Awakeners have built sanctuaries to protect themselves from the Banishers, but they've managed to break into each sanctuary but one. When the last sanctuary is raided by the Banishers and most of its residents taken prisoner, one girl swears to find out what all this is about. She embarks on a journey northward, intent on freeing her loved ones and her fellow Awakeners from the evil grasp of "the master". But could it be that this "master" is not as evil as he may seem?

Plot B: This is actually the one I was settling on for a while. It may seem a bit cliche :)

One fatal mistake of the past changes the future of the world. An evil tyrant named Ohtris is planning on finding out who "the biggest giant of them all" is and awakening him (this guy's not an Awakener, so he's going to need the help of someone else). It is up to Ember, who possesses the power of the sacred fire, to find out who the "biggest giant" is and get to him before Ohtris. The Sacred Fire is a gift that few Awakeners possess- whatever Ancient he/she tries to wake up will either die on the spot or wake up to be a hundred times stronger. She will face betrayal, trust, love, meet numerous friends, enemies, obstacles, and learn about her clouded past.

Plot C: I'm actually leaning toward this one :) Plot A and C are similar in many ways- but actually they're a lot different :)

For centuries, the Banishers- evil cloaked assassins- have killed hundreds and thousands of Awakeners. Their reason? The same reason for racism and the holocaust and so many other crude events marked down in history. Because they're different. Thus, the Awakeners were forced to hide, to clump together in groups and hide in the most remote places on the earth. But somehow, the Banishers managed to find and raid each of these "sanctuaries" except for one. When the last sanctuary is found and burnt, killing hundreds of lives, one girl named Ember decides to finish this once and for all. She embarks on a journey full of adventure and fantasy to end the prejudice and to fight for her people. Everyone is created equal- no amount of evil can stop that.

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Thank you for reading all that! I know it was a lot :) :) So if you could vote on which plot you like best, I would be very Laughing.


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Hey Sis! Did Bro leave the

Hey Sis! Did Bro leave the website?

Okay.....erm.........I'd say  Plot A. Or C. Or B, they're all great! But my first choice would be A. Gooooooood luck, sounds awesome!

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Posted by Athena on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 18:34
I kinda like plot C cause it

I kinda like plot C cause it has a little of both in it! All of them are really good though! I cant wait till you write more!

 

 

~Kay~

Posted by Kay on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 18:36
A I LIKE PLOT A

A I LIKE PLOT A

Posted by Alyssa on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 18:56
plot C. Plot B sounds too

plot C. Plot B sounds too cliche, and plot A--well, I've never been satisfied by OMG-the-bad-guy-isn't-really-evil type endings. So plot C is the best by far.

Posted by Clarissa on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 19:07
P.S. is bro still on?

P.S. is bro still on?

Posted by clarissag on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 19:08
Well, Bro hardly went on the

Well, Bro hardly went on the site when we did share the account- but he many still  go on occasionally :) :) Bro's right across from me right now- he says hi!

"Wumbo! You know, I wumbo, you wumbo. He, she, me, WUMBO! Womboed! Wumboing! Wumbology, the study of wumbo! It's first grade Spongebob!" -Patrick Star

Posted by Sis on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 19:44
A or C "Some of us have fire

A or C

"Some of us have fire on our tongues and fire in our bellies and wizardry on the tips of our fingers...."-Georges Marvelous Medicine by Roald Dahl

When life gives you lemons make grape juice then step back and let people wonder how you did it.

Posted by Rachel on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 19:12
Thank you everyone for your

Thank you everyone for your opinion! Haha- plots A and C are tied! :)

"Wumbo! You know, I wumbo, you wumbo. He, she, me, WUMBO! Womboed! Wumboing! Wumbology, the study of wumbo! It's first grade Spongebob!" -Patrick Star

Posted by Sis on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 19:47
Definately A. But the others

Definately A. But the others are cool, too.

*Create wonderful things* *Be good* * Have fun* *Write on*

Posted by Tasha on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 19:48
Sorry for tying it up again,

Sorry for tying it up again, but Plot C

*{I keep trying to kidnap Jasper, but every time, Alice is at the window with a baseball bat, waiting for me. How does she kn--ohh, right.}*

Posted by WolfWriter on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 19:53
Lol! "Wumbo! You know, I

Lol!

"Wumbo! You know, I wumbo, you wumbo. He, she, me, WUMBO! Womboed! Wumboing! Wumbology, the study of wumbo! It's first grade Spongebob!" -Patrick Star

Posted by Sis on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 20:01
Plot B!   Writing is not

Plot B!

 

Writing is not like math, in math 2 plus 2 always equals 4 no matter what your mood is. In writing, the way you feel changes everything.- stephanie myer

 

 

 

Posted by NimCarol on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 20:04
I actually liked Plot B

I actually liked Plot B best. But I also liked Plot A. I guess both.

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Posted by Wendy on Mon, 09/06/2010 - 20:19
Plot A sounds more

Plot A sounds more origional, thus I am leaning towards A more.

This story sounds really interesting, I'm going to go read it :) (but after school :S)

"Nobody can prevent you from choosing to be exceptional" - Mark sanborn

Posted by Chiaki on Tue, 09/07/2010 - 07:33
I would go for Plot A, and

I would go for Plot A, and if not C, but A is my first choice!

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Posted by LightningBolt on Thu, 09/09/2010 - 17:03


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