A Rose Frozen in Nitrogen, and the Shotgun that Killed it.
in in my tiny cubicle / private vacuum with books and random dancing
April 1st, 2011
It was just a whirlwind romance
That I never thought would last
I gave you your one chance
And you blew it pretty fast
This love of ours was a rose
Coated in liquid nitrogen
Immersed till it truly froze -
A symbol of eternal love.
Forever.
And then - some wicked monster -
Oh, distance and time -
Had to separate the him from her,
Oh - ye heavens, such a savage, cruel crime.
For then you took a silver bullet,
Shot it through the rose,
Tragically, beautifully, shattered it.
And I had to watch, with mine own eyes, my perfect world explode.
The little petal parts all strewn
On the sidewalk where you ended it;
I just want to forget it all
Don't want to remember one bit.
You said - on the sidewalk - the distance was ruining us,
That phone calls didn't make up for lost time,
And so our rosy romance was severed -
Once so perfect, so eternal, so...forever.
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Wow...this is really beautiful. I love your metaphor "rose coated in nitrogen." Great job on this. I truly love it, it's so inpiring.
The true meaning of love... Cross my heart, hope to die...
It's a really beautiful poem. :D
He snarled something that was either a curse or something along the lines of “Holy fudge, that hurt, you old boot!”