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Roses Bloom

Roses Bloom

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by Aimee
in ...I don't know. HOLY CROW, I'M LOST!!!!!!!!!

March 8th, 2009

Roses Bloom

As I walk into the summer field

I see that the roses have bloomed.

And I see that the beauty has yet to yield.

 

The redness takes me like a wave striking the shore.

 

The roses are sprinkled with a light mist that makes them more beautiful than a goddess on a beach sunset.

 

It seems as though Mother Nature has spread a red night cover over miles of land.

 

The roses gently rustle as the wind lightly blow the summer breeze away from me.

 

As I walk away from another red rose sunset,

I say goodbye to the home of the red rose blooms.

                                                                                 -Aimee

                                                                                       Oates (aka poetrygirl)


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You're new? Welcome. And

You're new? Welcome. And this poem is wonderful. I love the description.

Posted by Calla / Mira on Mon, 03/09/2009 - 01:31
Thanks. I love your work,

Thanks. I love your work, too. I read it this morning and it's amazing!-Aimee Oates (aka poetrygirl)

Posted by Aimee on Mon, 03/09/2009 - 12:55
Really? Which of my "great"

Really? Which of my "great" works have you read? My poetry or stories?

~Calla Jae

Posted by Calla / Mira on Mon, 03/09/2009 - 13:16
It was A Brief Moment of

It was A Brief Moment of Sanity.

"Talent does not replace hardwork, when talent is hardly working."

Posted by Aimee on Tue, 03/10/2009 - 12:59
Oh, that was by Mira, she

Oh, that was by Mira, she shares my account...

~Calla Jae

Posted by Calla / Mira on Tue, 03/10/2009 - 14:09
That's cool. I'll have to

That's cool. I'll have to check out some of your work. Which one do you suggest?

"Talent does not replace hardwork, when talent is hardly working."

Posted by Aimee on Wed, 03/11/2009 - 10:00
Ummm.... Mists or Run Aimi

Ummm.... Mists or Run Aimi Run

Posted by Calla / Mira on Wed, 03/11/2009 - 11:05
The Mists one was amazing. I

The Mists one was amazing. I really can't wait to read the next part! It'll read Run Aimi run right now!

 -"Talent does not replace hardwork, when talent is hardly working."

Posted by Aimee on Sat, 03/14/2009 - 16:15


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