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The Shadow Warrior

The Shadow Warrior

by Ms. Darr's Writing Stars
in Pennsylvania

February 18th, 2009

Along time ago in the kindom of Qua there was a castle.In the castle there was a wise king,a peaceful queen and a coragous prince.One time a dark shadow fell over the land of Qua.This shadow captured people and hypnotized them to join his army.Soon he would have enough warriors to destroy the land of Qua.Then one day the prince was out in the courtyard of the castle and the shadow saw him.He knew the prince was a excelent warrior.So he captured the prince and hypnotized him.Days went by and the shadow's army grew stronger.Then the war came the land of Qua was no match for the army of the shadow.The prince became known as the shadow warrior and was feard by everyone.The land of Qua was overrun and destroyed.The shadow became the ruler and the people of Qua were inslaved.


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cool... and it even has a

cool... and it even has a bad ending... no, i mean it's a good ending but it ends bad, like as in not "good", like, happy and stuff. Do you get it? lol way to be different (in a GOOD way!)

~eh, Gypsy!~

Posted by Bambi:~:Gypsy on Wed, 02/18/2009 - 18:23
Well it's a realistic story.

Well it's a realistic story. The shadow should've won in real life too because he had all these armies and the people of Qua didn't even know what was happening. Just like Sauron should've won in Lord of the RIngs.

 

 

"Rocks, when dropped from a height, have the unfortunate tendency to hurt..." -Shingen Takeda, Warriors Orochi (a video game)

Posted by Ice-Flame on Wed, 02/18/2009 - 21:32


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