Silver
 | by
Angel of Arumdin in Washington |
March 6th, 2010
I originally did this in 3rd grade, but I edited it and added on to it for a poetry contest called "River of Words". The contest is closed now, but here is the link for furter reference. http://www.riverofwords.org/
Silver
Flickering their lustrous tails
In and out of the water,
Salmon roam the silver lake,
Where a gleaming moon
Shines down on silver scales,
Like a silver spotlight
On a silver stage.
The velvet fur of a silver coyote
Ruffles in the silver wind,
The solemn song of it's cry
Echoing in the silver silence.
Beating their silver wings,
The silver mallards
Sweep across the shining sky,
And in a silver flurry,
The glistening silver clan flies
Over the silver land.
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oh i like it!
mmm silver reminds me of Eclipse's eyes....
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This is very good! I love the lines; "the solemn song of its cry/ Echoing in the silver silence." Very nice!
BTW, it's is suppose to be its (it's= it is)
hehe, soz. Other than that it's poifect ^.^
'By carrying a cat by its tail the man learns something he can't any other way.' - Mark Twain
I like how you used descriptive words like "lustrous" and "mallards". Very neat poem!
Oooo, I liked it, silver is an awesome word "like a silver spotlight/on a silver stage"! I loved it!
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