To someone on here who needs it. (Lily09)
Posted March 5th, 2013 by maxi
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Alphonse Elric {Max} in fighting with Edward, creating human transmutation. |
March 5th, 2013
I don't know how to say it
but I am feeling down
maybe it is because of the
reasons why you give a frown
i don't want you to feel this way
i want you to be free
and if you really do feel bad
i'll make you feel smiley
there is no reason to be sad
to me for you but it is for you
and i just want you to be free
if you just close your eyes
and picture happiness,
i will feel as if i've opened you up.
i love you but i don't want to lose you
through this mess.
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Ugh. This is why I need to come on more often. Beautiful poem, by the way. But honestly, I don't know anything anymore about this community. Other Lily's got some issues? Never knew. I'm so stupidly ignorant. -.- Especially after all you guys have done to help me.
But honestly, to the poem, it's beautiful. I'm even going to favorite it.
Good. I thought a couple of lines where confusing and the ryming at the end was not the same as the start, but i Thought it was good, it gave us a deatiled picture in our minds
~ Shortbread (Helen) ~ ~If life gives you an orange, make apple juice~
Thanks, Max. Really, thank you. It means a lot to me. Thank you so much, ily.
sassy is forever, wincest is unsinkable, and destiel is canon.
No problem. ^.^ Just stay strong; you're an amazing person.
"The difference between potato and tomato is that—Sam, don't pick your nose." ~ Dean Winchester, Supernatural.
~~Max~~
Thanks, I'll try (:
AND OMPJ LILY I MISSED YOU CAN I EMAIL YOU WE NEED TO CHAT MORE
sassy is forever, wincest is unsinkable, and destiel is canon.
This is a great poem, Max. Well worded, and a good length. Awesome ^.^