Sun (Final Peice)
by Mrs. Lovello's Winning Writers
in South Carolina
February 28th, 2008
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February 28th, 2008
Sun
Hot, boiling
Burning, Sweating, Sizzling
Tanning in the sun
Splashing, dropping, storming
Cold, wet.
Rain
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It's good, lotsa descriptions...
I liked it! Sounded Kinda like rain. Also good describing words ,Cheyenne Fuller and Anna Fox