Through A Child's Eyes
in North Carolina
March 11th, 2010
A/N: Wasn't sure what I was feeling when I wrote this. Amazingly, I wrote in rhyme, which is a feat for me, considering I'm a free-verse girl.
I am only a child
But I can still see
The ways of the world
as it turns around me:
The crickets that sing
to nobody each night
The sad mourning dove
as it cries and takes flight
The eye of the storm
that lures in fresh prey
The ocean that breaks
Leaving only its spray
The hurt that is caused
by words not meant
The skunk that hides behind
such a foul scent
The faces that vary
From place to place
The humans who wish
To claim endless space
That is our problem
this fickle trend
We always want,
but the earth will not bend
She lets each person
reap only what they've sown
Not letting one person
rise up on a throne
They tell me that I
can't comprehend
But maybe it is I
who knows best in the end
Not because of my height;
I'm not really that tall
But because I sit back
and just watch it all.
The adults of today
Have a lesson to learn
And believe it or not
It IS my concern
For one day quite soon
It will be the children's turn
To take over the world,
And all that we earn
If the world is not right
because you did not know to yield
What will we humans
use as a shield?
This is my plea,
This is my story
That we kids can still share
Some of the glory.
Maybe to you
I do not seem that wise
But this is only what I see,
Through a child's eyes.
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PLease enter my writing contest about your own world or anyhting the people that live in your world! a poem would be quite good!
Ok sure!
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Oh my gosh your reeely good
95% would cry if they saw ROBERT PATTINSON (Edward Cullen - Twilight, New Moon) standing on top of a sky scraper about to jump. If you're one of the 5% who would sit there eating pop corn saying "DO A FRONTFLIP!!" copy this and paste it in your signature
Firstly, I think it's unfair of you to ask Erm to join your contest, one should rather comment on the story rather than advertise your own work under someone else's story/poem.
THen; I loved it :D
It's stunning and the rhyming pattern doesn't fall to pieces. I love the simplicity and the 'examples' given. The ending is very sweet too :)
'By carrying a cat by its tail the man learns something he can't any other way.' - Mark Twain
Then why dont u enter my contest!
I sadi a poem would be quite good.