A very random poem about Sunsets, Sadness, Nights, Small Towns and Sweet Imagery. READ :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:
by Lizzie
in in my tiny cubicle / private vacuum with books and random dancing
January 19th, 2011
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in in my tiny cubicle / private vacuum with books and random dancing
January 19th, 2011
When the sun goes down
And darkness settles softly
The craggy green hills fade into
A sad grey blue
When the sun goes down
The whimsical notes birds sing
Peters slowly out and decline
Into a long melancholy whine
When the sun goes down
The town is wrapped in a foggy blanket
Of sweet dreams and nightmares
And the ghosts come out.
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Luv it! My only CC is that the ending needs to really make you jump, you know? Just like, "OOOHH!" If you added like one more line ot would be absoloutley fantastic :P Have fun - great stuff!
"Be yourself. Above all, let who you are, what you are, what you believe, shine through every sentence you write, every piece you finish.” ~John Jakes
Nice poem! I just wish it had a better title.
"Imagination is more important than knowledge." - Albert Einstein (But knowledge is important, too.)
Yes, 'tis awesome! :D
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