in South Carolina
February 15th, 2008
I love to play vito games my faviot game is need for speed most wanted.
I have a black sipera with fire dagones on it.It is allsom. I have to git out of the cops.Be3cause
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I am so glad to see you are
I am so glad to see you are writing and posting online. You are doing great! Have you thought about trying one of the types of leads we discussed before? What about a "LIGHTS! CAMERA! ACTION!" lead? Could you start off the sound of the cars or the sound and lights of the police chasing you? Be sure to grab your reader by adding that excitement. Keep drafting! You are headed in the right direction.
~~Mrs. Lovello~~ ;0)