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Wax Wings

Wax Wings

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by Clarissa
in the middle of the road, staring at a pretty bird

September 8th, 2010

A/N: I did a couple Greek-Mythology-based poems a while back: Midas and Medusa. This poem, Wax Wings, was planned at that same time, but I never wrote one that I was satisfied with until now.

 

We all fly

On wax wings

And the sun follows us

 

This is the part in your dreams of soaring

You fear. Tumbling from the sky

Cloaked in fire, screaming as

The children far below

Whisper among themselves:

Make a wish

 

We all fly...

 

Tomorrow when you wake

You will not remember

Anything but the bitter taste

Of fire in your mouth

And as you squint in the pink morning light

You know

That children wished upon you

And their dreams were never answered

 

Because you weren't a shooting star

Just a falling one

 

You used to fly...

 

You hear an echo

A scream in the distance

And you know that yet another star

Has just tumbled into the sea

 

It's not unusual

 

We all fly

On wax wings

And the sun follows us

 

There is no escape.

 


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Whoa. I remember that story,

Whoa. I remember that story, this summary of it is amazing............beautiful job Clarissa!

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Posted by Athena on Tue, 09/07/2010 - 17:20
:) Greek mythology is

:) Greek mythology is awesome. I like how you included the falling star, vs. shooting star.

And I believe on the second stanza you meant, "This is THE part," not "this is part", because it was a bit confusing to read. Yet another wonderful poem :)

Kiki:(after Red Queen has a hysterical fit of laughter) Am I missing something?

Neina:I think SHE'S missing something... Behold! The WALRUS! It's like a vampire, but better!~Neina

Posted by Ninja Cat on Tue, 09/07/2010 - 17:28
yep, that was a typo. danke.

yep, that was a typo. danke. *edits*

Posted by Clarissa on Wed, 09/08/2010 - 14:18
This is GREAT!!!!!!!! So

This is GREAT!!!!!!!! So much symbolism and the falling star and make a wish and falling into the sea... Awesome!

Every person's life is a fairytale written by God's fingers ~ Hans Christian Anderson

Posted by De-Ecrivian on Tue, 09/07/2010 - 23:13


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