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WHAT AM I?

WHAT AM I?

by Mrs. Hackett's Fifth Graders
in Georgia

November 28th, 2007

By the river I rest,below the moonlight sleeping.Through the woods I see a fire,but it is not a campers........its a hunters campfire!The hunter looks at me and picks somthing up,I can't make it out.Then I see it was a gun!!Down the hill around a tree hiding.Ina cave my mother calls me.It echoed through the woods,I guess that is how he found us.Petrified as I am trying to calm down.I close my eyes and dream and prey to be free.''Out in a sunny feild filled with flowers running to my true love.''What is that?Anunfamiluar sound,no even worse it was a gun shot coming toward us!!!!!!


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This is beautiful! I love

This is beautiful! I love it!

Posted by Heather on Wed, 11/28/2007 - 11:12
Heather's right! It should

Heather's right! It should be a poem, though... I think.....

Posted by the Cheshire Cat on Wed, 11/28/2007 - 14:26
yeah, really cool. i was

yeah, really cool. i was picturing a maniac holding the gun, and it was creeping me out

Posted by Elysia on Wed, 11/28/2007 - 14:40
kinda creepy but really

kinda creepy but really awesome
joe n' danny

Posted by hhdekalb on Wed, 11/28/2007 - 16:51
Simply Shocking! (In a good

Simply Shocking! (In a good Way)

Posted by Sara on Wed, 11/28/2007 - 17:23


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