WHAT AM I?
in Georgia
November 28th, 2007
By the river I rest,below the moonlight sleeping.Through the woods I see a fire,but it is not a campers........its a hunters campfire!The hunter looks at me and picks somthing up,I can't make it out.Then I see it was a gun!!Down the hill around a tree hiding.Ina cave my mother calls me.It echoed through the woods,I guess that is how he found us.Petrified as I am trying to calm down.I close my eyes and dream and prey to be free.''Out in a sunny feild filled with flowers running to my true love.''What is that?Anunfamiluar sound,no even worse it was a gun shot coming toward us!!!!!!
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This is beautiful! I love it!
Heather's right! It should be a poem, though... I think.....
yeah, really cool. i was picturing a maniac holding the gun, and it was creeping me out
kinda creepy but really awesome
joe n' danny
Simply Shocking! (In a good Way)