Where are those socks?????
by
in
August 11th, 2007
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in
August 11th, 2007
One day Ian looked in his sock drawer and his socks were missing. He called Marty to help him find his socks. It was thundering outside. When Marty came Ian was at the door waiting for him. No time to chit chat we've got a mystery to solve. So they hurried
upstairs and saw Henry, their pet dog eating his socks thinking they were food. This mystery is history said Ian.
The End
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Um, no offense, but this is kind of wierd. You didn't use correct punctuation, you rushed way too much, and the idea isn't too interesting.
Well, actually thinking, I think its allright. I mean, everyone writes random short things. I mean, what's wrong in that?
And by the way, we don't know how old Joe is. Maybe he's young commpared to us.
And this is his first story. I think we should compliment him in the ways it's good. Look on the bright side.
Well, if Joe's 7 or something, I guess it's ok.
Interesting...
Joe's been Jumped!
:^)
Joe, I think it's wonderful...
Joe, this is kinda....odd? Ya' know you should put more thoughts and details into your work. Oh and don't forget about quotation marks around diolouge.
Yeah, I kinda agree. You could actually make this loads more interesting if you thought it through and hadn't rushed. It's kind of like a kid's story.
good. how old are u?
joe r u new? this a cool story
I don't think Joe is new...Joe isn't in the "New Authors" list...
Joe is one of our brand new authors and this is his first story.
I like this story an intresting idea just try and use puntuation maybe this could be a comic.Are you new ?
It is funny.