Write not Fight is hard right now READ THIS NOW!!!>:(
in Colorado
September 4th, 2010
Write not Fight is stupid when you say it yet start it. I am not starting this, realistic thing. First a paragraph fight, then a suggestions fight, now a realistic fight. I am getting tired of being the bad guy around here. Its all of you whos the bad guys. I might just come and read all your stories and comments that they are unrealistic. Or how about just on the ones that aren't realistic to prove my point about me making unrealistic books and you don't. Perry, I am sorry about this, but I just can't the stress of this!!! I am tired of being the bad guy like I already said. All I want is for everybody to like Arin or at least read her in my books. I don't want to change anything, I don't want the comments of the "Arin College" or my books being unrealistic. I just want everybodyto have nice comments. You work your butts off on your books and everybody gives you nice comments but when I work MY butt off, you just ask me to change it your way. What if I put the book that took me 12 hours to make up. Will you ask me to change everyword and make I don't know Rob Riner the Actor in it or make Arin Lindsay Lohan? working 12 hours on a couch just for you to change it. What if I worked 12 hours on all my books, would you all tell me to change them as well. All your comments telling me to change my books when it took me a while really hurts me. All I want are nice comments on like how good it is instead of making it like all of your books. Ihave been making Arin books for 5 years the same way, since I was in 1st grade. All your comments really hurt me. So I hope you have funmaking me feel bad by how good your books are. You guys are bullies to me in a techy way. don't know how but you guys are. Perry, your safe from that but I am just tired of all that.
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okay, we arent asking u to change it. im sorry, but whateverr
Alison, I know you must feel horrible, like everyone's against you. Like maybe you're not a good writer. But seriously, be proud of your decisions, don't take everyone's opinions so personally. That's what this site is about. No, not 'mean' comments, but critizising. It'll help you become a BETTER writer. There's always room for improvement.
Now, there's no need to be harsh. And please, I don't wanna spark somethin' here but, don't say 'you guys are the bad guys' because that refers to all of us. I'm sorry, but I am almost positive that not everyone has said something mean to you on this site.
Don't focus on all the 'mean' comments, focus on the good ones. I know you must get some of those ya know?
Think about it.
WRITE NOT FIGHT! Please read my books!: 'To Find the Truth' (a novel), 'The Message', 'That's Life' (a novel). It is greatly apprieciated! Thanks! ktkat
Thanks Katie. I will think about......... only if I can keep Arin as she is. A paragraph in everyother story.
Oh and by the way, I NEVER GET GOOD COMMENTS ANYMORE! Its always fix here, put a little more CC there, its too unrealistic, its to babyish. Its always a comment on how to change the story that I have wanted to stay the same forever!!
well really it cant stay the same forever! because ur gonna get bwetter and its gonna get better. so try to do that
i have no problem with it being unrealistic, exept you overreact A LOT. And sorry, but KP is for CC. Face it.
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If you like tacos, clap your hands! I love tacos, I clap my hands!!! (hi Lucky!!!) My signatures are about food. Why? Because I'm hungry!!!!
Alison. I have no problem with something being unrealistic. But you react a lot. And KidPub...CC is part of it!
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Oh Alison, you still don't get it do you...?
Look, your stories can be as fantastical as you want, nobody is stopping that. The thing is, you just need to add more detail! Engage the reader! Show don't tell! Try to imerse us, the readers into the senario you present.
A wizard school seems to be a bit far fetched huh? But tons of people read Harry Potter. Try to emtionally snag the reader.
And don't take the comments so personal! We're all just kids, you know :)
Authors, He thought, Even the sane ones are nuts. -Random Editor Dude from the Da Vinci Code
I agree with you Kazel! Totally.
And Alison, you're welcome.
WRITE NOT FIGHT! Please read my books!: 'To Find the Truth' (a novel), 'The Message', 'That's Life' (a novel). It is greatly apprieciated! Thanks! ktkat
Okay, I'm not trying to start a bigger fight here, but I think the fight started when you overreacted to Danielle stating the fact that your book was out of season. She put it very nicely in my oppinion. We're just trying to help you, and as I've said before, CC is a writer's BFF.
My mind + a sharpie marker. What's the worst thing that could happen?
Yeah, that fight on your last arin story wouldn't have happened if you had just taken it and answered it calmly.
On a Papa John's order form: Unlimited toppings on any Large Pizza (max 7 toppings)
If you like tacos, clap your hands! I love tacos, I clap my hands!!! (hi Lucky!!!) My signatures are about food. Why? Because I'm hungry!!!!
I think it's ironic how many of us would sell our hides for a bit of CC and Alison get's loaded with the stuff and she isn't very grateful for it.
I wished she'd share...
Authors, He thought, Even the sane ones are nuts. -Random Editor Dude from the Da Vinci Code
Exactly! I want some for Electric October. *I've only posted one chapter, but I'm in the middle of the version off KidPub*
My mind + a sharpie marker. What's the worst thing that could happen?
If you link me up, I'll give you a good dose of CC :)
Authors, He thought, Even the sane ones are nuts. -Random Editor Dude from the Da Vinci Code
Okay! http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/electric-octoberch1to-kyle-66...
I've been sorta worried about it being cliche because of the whole elemental teenagers thing. *I think that idea started getting really popular around the time Avatar: the Last Airbender came out* Is it?
My mind + a sharpie marker. What's the worst thing that could happen?
Kidpub is not just for teenagers otherwise it wouldn't be called kidpub.
Totally agree with Kazel! If I had people giving me CC I wouldn't be unhappy...I'd be super grateful :)
"books - the world in a nutshell." ~ me
Maybe I don't want CC, maybe I just want it the way it is!!!! If you don't like it, then don't read it! Its not my fault you put comments up on stories after I say this! This is what creates these fights!
THEN GO BOTHER SOMEBODY ELSE WITH ALL YOUR DUMB CC!!! I DON'T WANT CC AND THATS FINAL!!!!!!!!
I bet your a great writer! And I totally know how you fell. And I don't want to start any fight, but, maybe the people commenting are just helping you.
I bake all the time, but I don`t like to eat the cookies when they`re done. I just like the dough.
Okay I am sick and tired of this. You guys if Alison doesn't like CC why don't we just not give it to her. Make her stories the way she wants to wether they're good or bad. We need to just stop wasting our breathe!
Move along aliens so brains here. ~Me
Yeah. Fine, Alison. You won. I'm NEVER going to read arin, and if I do, I will NEVER comment, unless I feel the need.
On a Papa John's order form: Unlimited toppings on any Large Pizza (max 7 toppings)
If you like tacos, clap your hands! I love tacos, I clap my hands!!! (hi Lucky!!!) My signatures are about food. Why? Because I'm hungry!!!!
See? All I want is for a commet or 2 saying how nice the book is on how much I have worked on it.
Fine then. A 'perfect' comment.
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Wow, Alison! This is soooooo good! I LOVE how Santa says that she will only get coal! Please write more! don't change ANYTHING!!!!!!! It is soooooooooooo perfect just the way it is.
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Alison, the rest of us would give an arm and a leg for some CC! It's pretty vain-yes, vain- of you not to take it.
On a Papa John's order form: Unlimited toppings on any Large Pizza (max 7 toppings)
If you like tacos, clap your hands! I love tacos, I clap my hands!!! (hi Lucky!!!) My signatures are about food. Why? Because I'm hungry!!!!
Its just book advice, its not like a billion bucks or a deed to the Earth right?
/ keys on our keyboard. Because they can break any time you know.
I don't want help! I want it the way it is without everybody commenting suggestions.
We were just trying to help you. But, if u don't want help, then that's alright.
Old Rose from 'Titanic': "After that the 700 people in the boats had nothing to do but wait. Wait to die, wait to live, wait for an absolution... that would never come."
Then why is everybody yelling AT ME TO MAKE ME USE IT AND TELLING ME I HAVE TO BELEIVE aRIN IS THE BEST THING THAT HAPPENED TO THIS SITE JUST SO THEY CAN WAIST TIME?????
Dude, you're the ones yelling at us. You can write your Arin stories as is, but I don't think anybody will read them... If you're going to write them the way you want to write them, do so. That's great. Just don't expect anyone to comment with: "I love Arin!!".
Why don't you even make a website and you can put all your Arin stories there?
Authors, He thought, Even the sane ones are nuts. -Random Editor Dude from the Da Vinci Code
Doesn't making a website cost money?
Not really. Just google free websites.
Webs.com is good :)
Authors, He thought, Even the sane ones are nuts. -Random Editor Dude from the Da Vinci Code
Well, when I was young about 2 years ago, my babysitter and I made a website... 2 accually, from webs.com and it said she had to pay money for it and she ran out or forgot them and we lost the site URLs.
When I was young, I made 2 websites from webs.com and it was free. You just have to pay for the domain or extra features.
Or even try blogspot.com.
Authors, He thought, Even the sane ones are nuts. -Random Editor Dude from the Da Vinci Code
Can you tell me how old you areand list all the domian/ extra features so I can avoid them? Does a cool website backround count as extra? Does another page count as extra, does pictures count as extra? :)
Really, they'll just straight up tell you what costs extra and what doesn't. Just follow the directions... Pretty simple.
Authors, He thought, Even the sane ones are nuts.
-Random Editor Dude from the Da Vinci Code
Well, sometimes, I would just go there and make a cool website but don't post it! Seeing how cool it would be.
Totally dig the sig (rhymes hurrr)! Titanic ftw!
Authors, He thought, Even the sane ones are nuts. -Random Editor Dude from the Da Vinci Code
we're not being mean to ya. just giving ya good feed-back on how to make your stories better. and we aren't the bad guys, we're just the people making sure your stories are the best they can be. and we all work our butt off in all of our stories, and we still change somethings if we feel like it would make out storybetter.