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The Adventures of Rose; Parallel Planes: Changes

The Adventures of Rose; Parallel Planes: Changes

Posted July 23rd, 2021 by Rose

by Rose
in Maharashtra

Changes

Ok so I wanted to change up a few things because I feel it will be a little easier for you to understand everything that way. If you don’t like the changes let me know in comments and I will go back to old way. Ok here we go.

Lavender: Rose come on we’re going to be late to practice.

Me: I’m coming, I’m coming.

Me, Lavender, Azalea, Ruby, and Emerald were all suppose to meet for a study session which I did NOT want to attend it was Friday and I was really tired but, I did want to meet my other sisters.

So right now, me lavender and azalea are trying to sneak all the way to the barrier without anyone noticing.

Lavender: *eep*

The guards had just started their evening round

Lavender: we can’t leave now can we

Me: but …

Lavender: No, Rose we’ll have to go some other time

Me: Oh, come on…. Azalea tell her it’s fine and we can totally make it

Azalea: sorry Rose we can’t you know that

Me: Ugh fine

Azalea and Lavender: come on Ros

And I left to my own castle. Here I had some spare time it’s a drawing of the first floor of my room tell me if you want to see the second level or any other room in my castle

 

 


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oop's i thought you guys

oop's i thought you guys would be able to see the picture i guess not.

Sorry

Magically, Rose

Posted by Rose on Tue, 07/27/2021 - 05:52
Here try this
Posted by Rose on Tue, 07/27/2021 - 05:53
Okay! I've caught up so

Okay! I've caught up so far.

 

I like the new format. It makes the dialogue much easier to follow. 

 

Here's a title suggestion:

The Adventures of Rose in Hogwarts for Book 1

The Adventures of Rose in the Parallel Planes for Book 2

 

I like the addition of her stepsisters and stepfamily, and how she's very much in the middle of two worlds. It reminds me of something I wrote a long time ago: https://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/betwixt-realms-2955154029 if you're interested.

 

Good yard,

(Warmest regards)

Snow

Posted by Tía Snow on Mon, 07/26/2021 - 12:41
Thank You so much now i know

Thank You so much now i know someone still reads this.

Also ,Thank You for the title suggestions

Rose doesn't consider MOST of them her step family except maybe her step dad/ step mom cause they aren't well.. you'll see

i liked the story, i rember reading a series similar to it called "the story thieves" i think

Magically, Rose

Posted by Rose on Tue, 07/27/2021 - 07:05

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