/* PCD change http to https for CSRF JUL 2017 */ The Bank (Chapter 5, Night) | KidPub Press //
The Bank (Chapter 5, Night)

The Bank (Chapter 5, Night)

Posted April 19th, 2007 by AlecO

by Alec
in Michigan

I arrived home at about six o'clock. The sun was just beginning to set, the dimming light casting a strange orange color that mingled with the gray February sky, creating a ominous purple. I opened the door to the apartment building, and trudged up the steps to my apartment. I inserted my key into the lock, but, strangely, the door was open. I pushed it open, my irrational fears beginning to take over. When I stepped inside, it looked like a twister had hit, and hit hard. Papers were scattered across the floor, my television lay on the floor, shattered, its wires contorted and sparking. A lamp that had been sitting on a table was missing its shade, and the bulb was cracked. I stood in the door frame, my mouth gaping open. My desk had been overturned, and the small window in the apartment was smashed open, its remains scattered below. I walked in, smashed bits of who-knows-what crunching under my feet. Upon further inspection, I spied a note, pinned on the wall next to the window. Scrawled across the paper in red permament marker were five words. STAY AWAY FROM THE BANK. With this I collapsed to the floor, breathing heavily. This time, the guy had come after me.

See more stories by Alec


Posted by Krishna on Thu, 04/19/2007 - 21:46
this is a fantastic mystery

this is a fantastic mystery with great description!

Posted by Ellen on Sat, 04/21/2007 - 09:47
This IS creepy. And neat. No

This IS creepy. And neat. No as 'happy-go-lucky' as I thought it would be. REALLY GOOD.

Posted by Natashaannalibby on Sun, 04/22/2007 - 13:01
Sorry, i dint check this out

Sorry, i dint check this out for A LONG time. neway, real good, as i had suspected but lemme move on to chappie 6...

Posted by Susmi on Wed, 05/23/2007 - 06:42

KidPub Authors Club members can post their own stories, comment on stories they've read, play on KidMud, enter our contests, and more!  Want to join in on the fun? Joining is easy!