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Boys and Girls

Boys and Girls

Posted July 25th, 2019 by FrostBittenKitten

by it's great to be 8 {luna}
in the clouds


Boy meets girl

Boy likes girl

Girl likes boy


They become friends

But neither really want to be just friends

So that part's only for show


Boy asks girl out

Girl says yes

Boy asks girl to be his girlfriend


She says yes

Of course, what else would she say?

She likes him


But does she really?

Why does this feel so unfulfilling?

Everyone else likes this, or at least pretends to


Girl says goodbye to boy


Why drag this on if she doesn't really feel that way?

Better to end it now then break his heart

But why does she feel so empty?

Why does she feel so wrong?

She wonders if something is wrong with her


Because that's not how the story is supposed to end

What did she do wrong?

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Just as a formatting thing:

Just as a formatting thing: I prefer putting a bit of space between the top of the page and the first line of my story. I think it looks better that way on this site. Just letting you know in case you hadn't tried it. If you have, do you like it or dislike it?

As for the poem itself: yikes? As a kid who's never dated anyone I can't say I relate, but I see things like this happening in the people around me. You ask a question in this poem. What's the point of dating? Of romance itself? Of marriage? Maybe in a later poem, offer your thoughts as to the answer. 

Or, you know. Offer your thoughts in the comments right now. 



Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by *Snow* on Mon, 07/29/2019 - 16:25
i'd offer my thoughts if i

i'd offer my thoughts if i had an answer right now hahah


"Today is going to be a good day and here's why: because today, today at least you're you - and that's enough." -Dear Evan Hansen

Posted by luna :) on Tue, 07/30/2019 - 14:42
That can't be easy. It

That can't be easy. It sounds like maybe friends was the best place for you. Sorry I can't help more.

To know me better, read A Little Bit of Hope

Posted by Elizabeth on Tue, 10/15/2019 - 16:04

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