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Posted January 26th, 2020 by FrostBittenKitten

by it's great to be 8 {luna}
in the clouds

A/N: hey guys, this is luna!  so a few things to say before i begin: first of all, i am 8 years old on kp as of the 20th so that's cool!  second, this is the first of a new series of poems so i hope y'all enjoy :)


i didn't expect to be sitting here in this coffee shop

laughing with you and telling you secrets

the secret longing to be a part of something

in the pit of my stomach, satisfied at last


my smile is genuine

even if the words we exchange

are not quite as carefree as they seem


being with you is like a balm for my soul

every moment like a precious stone

that i want to capture forever


is it weird that i miss you already?

i want to spend every moment with you that i can

before i leave


this is so typical now

but i know that for a long time

coffee will make me think of my friends

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hmm lowercasing and free

hmm lowercasing and free verse...maximum relatability

I love your imagery and metaphors though, especially moments as precious stones.
Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by Tía Snow on Sun, 01/26/2020 - 15:31
Thanks! You’re always so

Thanks! You’re always so supportive!! :D

"Today is going to be a good day and here's why: because today, today at least you're you - and that's enough."

-Dear Evan Hansen

Posted by it's great to b... on Mon, 01/27/2020 - 10:57

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