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My Poetry Collection : IV :: [untitled]

My Poetry Collection : IV :: [untitled]

Posted July 28th, 2017 by alemye10

by oof.alem.oof
in what?? “The content of this field is kept private and will not be shown publicly.”

Please comment. This one isn't as good as the last one but nevertheless a comment would make my day. : )
In the child of questioning the old ones echo,
What is up with this child?
Why is she so deep?
Why doesn't she play with her dolls like her sisters?

Maybe it's because
Of what she's been through
Unknown to the elders
But reality to her

Her questions are left unanswered
Her eyes are left wild
Her mouth is left talking
Her life is left a mystery

She is too different
Too young to think like this
She's left on the curb
Because of this

The older ones think
Is good for her
But to her it's torture

A single tear
Rolls down her cheek
She must give up
She is just a weirdo

Many years later
When she is the elder
She still has those questions
Unknown to her

She has lived a life
Of loneliness and sorrow
Because of how her mind thinks
Because of the questions she asks

Truth is
Those questions
Were to hard
For those elders

A ten year old mind
More complex
Than the other
Eighty year old one

Just too hard to imagine
So it's fake
But without help
A ten year old can't stop reality

But what could they have done
Maybe they could have helped
But no
They didn't

The girl, now eighty
Knows the answers
Unlike the other elders
She understands

But it's too late now
Too late
By seventy years of isolation
Because she’s unique

If only everyone else had knew that

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Very deep, I like it. Also

Very deep, I like it.

Also if you are using roman numerals for numbering the corect symbol would be IV.????

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Posted by Vivace on Fri, 07/28/2017 - 19:53
Thanks! Oh yes! IV! How


Oh yes! IV! How could I forget? Sorry, I don't know what I was thinking.

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- Beatrix Potter

Posted by @lem*on on Fri, 07/28/2017 - 21:41

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