A Random Burst of Writing #5-Half-Feline part 2
Posted March 9th, 2023 by Cheezmra
The alarm rang in my ear, I reached out and pressed the large snooze button. I rolled over and stared at the white ceiling. I was in a doomsday bunker but had my own room. It was as small and as bare a prison cell besides the alarm clock. There seemed to be no point in getting up but I knew the captain needed me. What was the point of the bunker? My captain had told me last night that I had to get supplies from a bunker farther away. Reluctantly I got out of bed and pulled on a slightly wrinkled camo suit. I walked to the bathroom to brush my long black hair. I caught a glimpse of my face in the mirror. I was a face I hated.
It was the face of a tiger.
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!! What a twist!!
This is a great li'l blurb, and the twist was great! I want more description, though. Of her. Of how the light (if any) interacts with the surroundings. How the surroundings smell. If she can hear anything.
well i could haver made it longer but i dident want to reveal the fact that shes the one from the first part.
otherwise i probably wou;ldve descibed the drooping ears and whiskers and the tail and fur and stuff
Dragon lover? (sorry its going a little slow) plz cc https://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/land-dragons-introduction-33...
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