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Surviving the Undead. Chapter 3, and 4

Surviving the Undead. Chapter 3, and 4

Posted June 18th, 2019 by Olivinat

by Fire Dragon 74
in Wisconsin

Chapter 3-Mystery

       When we got home, we hooked up the zip line and I started to cook dinner of melted snickers on laughy taffy.

       “June! Come here! Look!” Roen yelled.

       I run to him. The once zombie packed ground under the tree fort was clear! 

        “What?” I asked in disbelieve. “How?”

        We climbed down the ladder to get a better look at the situating.

        “It looks like their gone?!” Max said climbing down in disbelieve

Chapter 4-Refound


We wondered where the zombies were so we went to find out why. When we were walking along, I said “We need a ride.” And everyone agreed so we started looking for one. We checked in every car shop and peeked in every garage. No luck all the cars destroyed or only parts survived. It took 1 hour but we {finally} we found {at the 300th house} a pick-up truck. I tried the engines it worked!

        “Yes!” I yelled.

        “Wait, does it have gas?” said Max

        I checked the gas

        “It’s full.” I replied

        “What do we call it?” said Nathen

        “Killer machine?”

        “Death monster?”

        “who cares?” I said

        “Wait I heard something.” I whispered

        The noise of shuffling zombie feet, lots of them was heard. I peeked out.

        “Guys! An army of zombies in neat orders is marching! Toward us!” I cried

        “What?” Max yells in disbelief

        I peeked out again.

        “And a huge, gray, red eyed, m-m-m-monster is controlling them!” I said

        Nathen peeked out.

         “I’d call it a controller.” He said

        “That thing is controlling the zombie and making them march neatly ready to kill us and you’re talking about a name?!” Max erupts

        “Well when you put it that way, yes! We are! A good thing to talk about before you die don’t you agree?” Nathen replies looking thoughtful.

        “No! No! No! We are not going to die and No it is not a good thing to talk about!” Max yells glaring at him

         We grab our weapons.

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Moooore Questionssss!! 1.

Moooore Questionssss!!

1. How did they start the car without the keys? 

2. Can you check 300 houses in an hour?

3. Why are all the cars destroyed? Zombies?

4. Do the characters always eat dinner of candy?

5. What are they using as weapons?

I know a bit about Nate now! Oh, is he the person who uses the fourth bed in the fort? I like how he observes and names things even in the midst of great peril!


Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by *Snow* on Tue, 09/17/2019 - 20:47
the keys were in the house

the keys were in the house because the garage door was closed


yep and age.


baseball bats, bow and arrow, ETC.

I made him the jokester .

Posted by Olivinat on Wed, 09/18/2019 - 10:02
Daaang Snow! You should

Daaang Snow! You should critique The Accident for me like this!  XD



As you walk down the fairway of life, smell the roses. You only get to play one round. -Ben Hogan

Writers live twice. -NG

Posted by Ava on Sat, 09/21/2019 - 21:01
I gotchu, but i gotta catch

I gotchu, but i gotta catch up on this and Ultimates too


Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by *Snow* on Sat, 09/21/2019 - 22:42

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