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Vitae AU, Chapter Five

Vitae AU, Chapter Five

Posted January 16th, 2020 by katchyboo

by IllegalSparkles
in The Dungeons

 'D o n ' t  y o u  k n o w  h o w  t o  g r e e t  a  n e w  p a l ?  T u r n  a r o u n d  a n d  s h a k e  m y  h a n d .'

Frisk, very slowly, turned around and shook the person's hand.

A whoopee cushion let out a long "pffffffffffffffffffffffffffffftttt".

'Heh, the old whoopee cushion in the hand trick. It's always funny.' said a short skeleton. 'So, you're a human, right- Chara?! Chara Dreemur!?' He seemed to recognize Chara.

'Yup. That's me.'

'But- you were... the king said you'd gone missing.'

'Yeah, well, I kinda did. Me, Azzy, and my mom.'

'Alright, then. I'm Sans, Sans the skeleton. What's your name, kid?' he said to Frisk.

'Frisk.' 

'Right then. I'm... actually supposed to be on watch for humans right now, but I don't really care about capturing anybody. My brother, though. Papyrus. He's a human-hunting FANATIC. He's actually already caught one. She was really little, but still. I think that's him over there. Quick, you two- hide behind that pair of conveniently-shaped lamps.'

'...these are REALLY conveniently shaped.' Frisk said, an eyebrow raised.

'Yup, but I wouldn't question it if I were you.' Chara whispered.

A tall skeleton who Frisk assumed was Papyrus walked into view.

'Sup, bro?' Sans said.

'YOU KNOW WHAT'S "SUP", BROTHER. IT'S BEEN EIGHT DAYS AND YOU STILL HAVEN'T RECALIBRATED YOUR PUZZLES!' 

'Hey, bro, come on. I've gotten a ton of work done today. A skele-ton.'

'OH MY GOD, SANS! I'M LEAVING.'

'You do that, bro.' Sans looked around for a minute before calling out to Frisk and Chara. 'You can come out now.'

 

 


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Okay...this is REALLY FUN. I

Okay...this is REALLY FUN. I think I've already expressed how much I enjoy good!Chara, and I love how harmlessly mischievous you're writing her. I also enjoy how similar the mechanics of this adventure will be to the original game. Monsters still out to capture humans...! 

I'm fascinated as to how Flowey's place in the narrative will be replaced or bypassed. That seems like your most major obstacle at the moment. 

but if this is the vitae au..

(then won't the other six kids still be alive somehow??)

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Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by Tía Snow on Mon, 01/20/2020 - 12:09
I just kinda don't plan to

I just kinda don't plan to have Flowey at all, lol. I could just have him be seperate from Asriel? But I kinda didn't have him when Frisk fell down, so I'm kinda committed to him not being there


"You see, it doesn't matter who we are, Sophie. It's what we do." ~Lady Lesso, The School for Good and Evil

Posted by IllegalSparkles on Tue, 01/21/2020 - 08:02
Well, I’m completely fine

Well, I’m completely fine with him not being there. I’m merely worried about who will press the plot forward in his absence and who or what will end up breaking the barrier, because I presume Asriel will not be in a soul-stealing mood today.
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Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by Tía Snow on Tue, 01/21/2020 - 16:48
Well, it's not only Asriel

Well, it's not only Asriel and Chara who never died...


"You see, it doesn't matter who we are, Sophie. It's what we do." ~Lady Lesso, The School for Good and Evil

Posted by IllegalSparkles on Wed, 01/22/2020 - 10:47
As I suspected

As I suspected ;)
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Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by Tía Snow on Wed, 01/22/2020 - 17:48
hmmm, I've never seen

hmmm, I've never seen Human-hunting Papyrus.. interesting 

"Champion, I can take a beating, I'll rise again." - Barns Courtney

Posted by The KP Mom on Tue, 01/28/2020 - 23:53
That’s him usually, the

That’s him usually, the catch is that he doesn’t actually want to hurt them (or anyone)
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Spero quod via tua est directa et quod tuum onus est levis.

Posted by Tía Snow on Wed, 01/29/2020 - 00:04

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