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Posted December 20th, 2018 by FrostBittenKitten

by luna :)
in The heights

At first I am clumsy and slow

But as the music continues

I relax

Take a deep breath

And I am suddenly

T a k i n g   f l i g h t

 

I am floating a thousand feet off the ground

Untouchable

Unbreakable

For once I don't think about my posture or my face or any of my other inperfections

I    a m    f r e e

 

 

The music builds and builds as I let myself go

Using my voice to show my feelings

Using my body to show my feelings

Using my guitar to show my feelings

It doesn't matter

The music is freedom

T h e   m u s i c   i s    p a r t   o f    m e 

 

I am entranced

Uplifted and spirited away

My thoughts and my song becoming one

No miscellaneous thoughts plague me

It is like shedding a heavy cloak that I didn't know I had

I   a m   f r e e

 

Nothing and no one can stop me

Not when I am this giddy

High on the music itself

Feeling it like a cool drink of lemonade on a hot summer's day

L i k e   a   d r e a m

 

Flying on the wings of my music

Impervious to the world around me

This is my world

This is my home

I   a m   f r e e

A n d   I   s p r e a d   m y   w i n g s


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I love your use of

I love your use of formatting to make the poem literally dance-- it's interesting how I'm more drawn to read it because it pulls my eyes from place to place.

Really good job, and I love the message of music as a path to freedom.

 

 

Posted by justasmalltowng... on Sat, 12/29/2018 - 13:12
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Posted by fa la la la la ... on Tue, 01/01/2019 - 15:08
xxPheonixa12xx I love your

xxPheonixa12xx

I love your writing very much.I can really undertsand this kind of thing.You let go of all the dark thoughts when your doing something yo love so much.You lose yourself in it and sudddenly...Your gone.You are happy.You are who you really are and not who you show the world.

All I can say is well done.Beautifully writen

Posted by Ava on Fri, 05/24/2019 - 10:04
thank you!  I try to

thank you!  I try to channel my emotions into other activities like writing and it definitely makes me better.  I agree that my truest self is probably in the written word and in my art.

 

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Posted by starlight (luna) on Sun, 05/26/2019 - 19:26

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