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The Boundaries

The Boundaries

Posted June 13th, 2013 by Read_Write

A Book Review by feysand (lydia)
in love with tom holland

One Day (Grace)


'The Boundaries' is set in the future (I think) and is about an evil woman named Vera. She has built walls around most of the world and erased everyone's memories, but Allie and Piper still amazingly still have their memories. This is a threat to Vera, and Cedar, a boy in Vera's army that is actually good, helps them run away. Vera is still hunting them, sending people out to kill them. She even attacks them herself...but will she win in the end?


Grace has devoloped her characters very well. Piper and Allie pretty much hated Cedar at first, but they eventually began to trust him. After a while, Rachel, Cedar's girlfriend, who had been turned into an Invisible, shows up, too. Also, Vera pops up herself, which shows that Vera does not think she is weak, and also that she is superior over Allie, Piper, and Cedar.


The plot is also very well devoloped, with Vera popping up or something terrible happening right when everything starts to fix itself. Grace has put element powers and all sorts of crazy things in this book, which makes it very interesting to read.


Overall, The Boundaries is a very good book. I was very interested in this book, and even started on the second. There are a few grammatical errors, but those can be easily fixed. Grace said she is planning to publish, and I think she should. Someday, this book will probably will win a Nobel Prize or be a best-selling. Great job, Grace!

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Posted by One Day (Grace) on Thu, 06/13/2013 - 17:44
No problem. xP I'm glad you

No problem. xP I'm glad you were satisfied with your review! xDDDD



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Posted by Invisible (Lydia) on Thu, 06/13/2013 - 22:09

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