The Camping Game *REVIEW*
Posted July 14th, 2013 by WhiteFox
A Book Review by *Juniper*
The Camping Game
Written By: Kaley <3
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1. THE CAMPING GAME
CHARACTERS AND STORY
In the prologue, Nathaniel shows some characteristics, and well as his painful past.
He explains how his father turned from him as if he didn’t exist, which I know would be hard for any kid at ten years old. But he also had a good relationship with him, which makes it kind of emotional.
But this is when Nathaniel starts to show some character. Of course he was sad when his parents died, but near the end of the prologue, he says quote, ‘’I now despised them, and had a bitter heart towards them.’’
The fact that this ten year old boy feels this ways towards others and has the will to run away from his home and decide to live in the woods is pretty incredible. This shows that this character will be a strong one. He will be willing and brave, and he won’t let any person tear his heart in half.
TO THE AUTHOR: If you don't want Nathaniel to be like this, you should twist the prologue just a little bit so that he turns out how you want him to.
Although I have no idea what the black dog was about, I have faith that the author will make it work, even if it is not apart of the plot or not.
TO THE AUTHOR: Okay, I am sorry, but the title does not fit at all. For one, the name sounds like some time of little competition between best friends while they camp in the woods. AND, the term ‘games’ is used a bit too much lately. Think of something a little more unique and eye catching would be perfect.
Just a different name and I think your book will do a FANTASTIC job.
For fantastic writing, creative characters, exellent grammar, and awesomeness, I will rate this
book (prologue) a
Feel free to comment on the review itself. It is my first review, and I want some tips about reviewing!
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