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The Cure for Juvenile Folly

The Cure for Juvenile Folly

Posted January 8th, 2013 by rebecca

A Book Review by Rebec
in Rivendell, the only place in Middle Earth that gets Wi-Fi

Mary Elizabeth

Sarcasm. There is nothing more powerful or fascinating. And in a tiny, cynical introduction, it is fantastic. It is great. So, lists! Short story, listing features! That's the idea here. So...

Good points:

1. It is amazing.

2. It is slightly Lemony Snicket-esque

3. It reminds me of Roald Dahl's war on television

4. It tells people to read.

5. It's clever. Supremely so.


And bad things:

1. Spelling mistakes - ludicrous.

2. Too short, by far.


For the author (because I cannot miss this section):

Check your grammar and spelling, and write more. Much more.

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I thought you'd said that

I thought you'd said that you didn't want to review anything that short? Well, thank you, anyway. I'm working on the next chapter, and it's much longer.

Again, I very much appreciate your critiscism and compliments!

Posted by Mary Elizabeth on Tue, 01/08/2013 - 16:42

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