A Book Review by TerCreepypastaWri
What would it feel like to get whipped? Daniel knew that the Richies whipped their Morwens a lot. But since he was still a student he wasn’t supposed to be whipped, at least not yet. Tomorrow he would be assigned to a Richie of his own, and then he would leave the school, to be dragged around by a thick leather collar. A chain would be attached to the collar, and the Richie would hold it his entire life, never letting Daniel go. The instructors told them that last night, and he feared it terribly. He turned over onto his side, wedging his elbow between himself and the thin mattress. There was no pillow, and no comforter, just a mattress like a piece of paper, and a sheet, as thin and useless as the wind on a hot summer day.
But, Garrett has misspelled a few words and should give a bit more detail on a few parts. Garrett, maybe you should explain what the match up hall, or whatever, looked like. And you should probably explain Kai, Kate, and Sandy a bit better. I just can't imagine them as well as I can with Daniel.
Overall, this is a GREAT book and I just HAVE to give it 4 stars! I hope that Garrett continues soon!
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