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The Otherworld

The Otherworld

Posted July 3rd, 2013 by BriannaH

A Book Review by Abbey
in lost in the world of YA


Rating: 10 out of 10

Gore: No
Romance: No
Cursing: No
Series: Not sure
Would I Recommend It? Yes
Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/otherworld-book-one-complete-chapter-one-kind-repost-i-guess-2171138621

It's about four teenagers -Ilsa, Finn, Sophie, and Jack- that are from the Otherworld. But they couldn't live there for as long as they need to, so other Otherworldlies get each of them adopted by a different family and all families sign a contract saying the four will be returned to Wershire Manor in eleven years. Each chapter is narrated by a different character as they find out the truth about who they really are and where they truly belong.

Originality: Pretty original. Great twists on an overused plot.
Characters: Very realistic and in-depth.
Description: Extremely good. There was an ever-constant picture in my head while I read.
Suspense: A little in the first two or three chapters, but not much after that. 
Action: Only the four and some other Otherworldlies go back to the Otherworld, and I don't really consider that action. 

Errors - 
Grammatical: N/A
Spelling: A few throughout the book (the main being Otherworldlys instead of Otherworldlies)
Punctuation: N/A
Capitalization: N/A

To Work On:
-Fix spelling errors
-Put in some action in upcoming chapters to ensure it doesn't get boring

Overall -
I love this book! It's got very in-depth characters and amazing description. Keep writing, Clara!


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Omigod thank you sooo much!

Omigod thank you sooo much! Thanks so much for the CC!! :) Yay!! This is faved!

The Otherworld awaits you . . .

Posted by Clara on Wed, 07/03/2013 - 14:50
No problem! :) Please enter

No problem! :)

Please enter Gemstone Writer, my very own annual writing contest! http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/1st-annual-gemstone-writer-co...

Posted by Fireworks (Abbey) on Wed, 07/03/2013 - 19:14

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