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Sacrifice

Sacrifice

Posted December 30th, 2012 by BriannaH

A Book Review by Abbey
in lost in the world of YA

Author: 
Tess and Lena
Rating: 
5

This story is amazing ...

It's about a girl named Kylie Jensen that recently experienced the death of her older sister, Alana. She and Alana's good friend Jason would do anything to have her back. And there is a way. The government has proposed that they will bring a person back from the dead, but in order to keep the population under control, the person that wants someone brought back is assigned a person to kill. Kylie goes to the government and finds out that they will bring Alana back. Although to do so, she needs to kill Jason. Who will Kylie choose? Her beloved sister or the boy that she knows she's perfect for?

The plot is unique. The characters are very realistic. The description was good, but could be improved. I did see a couple of spelling and punctuation mistakes, but all of them are minor.

I would recommend this story to everyone. If you're interested, here's the link to the first chapter: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/sacrifice-co-write-lena-prologue-and-chapter-one-1842132435  and the second chapter: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/sacrifice-co-write-tess-chapter-two-2213132469 

For the authors: Double check your spelling and punctuation, add a bit more description, and keep writing. smiley


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Thanks :D I'll have to give

Thanks :D I'll have to give a shoutout to you in the next chapter I write!

 

At the intersection between life and death... http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/rosy-st-chapter-one-its-final.... Also take this poll: http://www.kidpub.com/poll/what-book-should-i-do-comedy-seri

Posted by Kylie Jenson (Tess) on Sun, 12/30/2012 - 21:34
Ok. I look forward to

Ok. I look forward to reading more!

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Posted by Snowdrop (Abbey... on Sun, 12/30/2012 - 21:37
Thank you! :D we'll work on

Thank you! :D we'll work on what you said!

Okay, here's my theory: Nicki Minaj and Lady Gaga are actually Capitol citizens who couldn't stand The Hunger Games, so they invented a time machine and traveled back to our time and became pop stars. O.O

Posted by Omega (Lena) on Sun, 12/30/2012 - 23:50

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