Posted December 30th, 2012 by BriannaH
A Book Review by Abbey
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This story is amazing ...
It's about a girl named Kylie Jensen that recently experienced the death of her older sister, Alana. She and Alana's good friend Jason would do anything to have her back. And there is a way. The government has proposed that they will bring a person back from the dead, but in order to keep the population under control, the person that wants someone brought back is assigned a person to kill. Kylie goes to the government and finds out that they will bring Alana back. Although to do so, she needs to kill Jason. Who will Kylie choose? Her beloved sister or the boy that she knows she's perfect for?
The plot is unique. The characters are very realistic. The description was good, but could be improved. I did see a couple of spelling and punctuation mistakes, but all of them are minor.
I would recommend this story to everyone. If you're interested, here's the link to the first chapter: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/sacrifice-co-write-lena-prologue-and-chapter-one-1842132435 and the second chapter: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/sacrifice-co-write-tess-chapter-two-2213132469
For the authors: Double check your spelling and punctuation, add a bit more description, and keep writing.
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