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Stolen Souls

Stolen Souls

Posted July 1st, 2013 by BriannaH

A Book Review by Abbey
in lost in the world of YA

Author: 
Confuzzled
Rating: 
4

Rating: 9 out of 10

Gore: No
Romance: Crushes, but no actual romance
Cursing: No
Series: I don't know
Would I Recommend It? Yes
Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/untitled-prologue-please-comment-i-am-really-proud-2228138181

It's about four teenagers -Kaylen, Abbie, Nick, and Justin- and all of them are part of a group called the Corporation. They get an assignment, but it's very dangerous. Kill the person that's stealing souls, and fast.

Originality: Quite original. 
Characters: In-depth and easy to relate to.
Description: Really good.
Suspense: Not very much, but it's early on in the book.
Action: None. But as the book progresses I'm pretty sure there will be some.

Errors -
Grammatical: A few, but all are easy to spot. 
Spelling: N/A
Punctuation: I don't recall seeing any.
Capitalization: N/A

To Work On:
-Double check for grammatical and punctuation errors

Overall - 
I love this book. It's got a great plot, characters, description... I'm intrigued to see where it goes! Keep writing, Confuzzled! 


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Thank you so much! I am glad

Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it!

~If you think I have no brain, you're right. I lost my brain in the Battle of the Sloths, fighting with my pet narwal who lost his sanity.~

Posted by Master of the H... on Mon, 07/01/2013 - 16:58
You're welcome. And I loved

You're welcome. And I loved it! :)

Please enter Gemstone Writer, my very own annual writing contest! http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/1st-annual-gemstone-writer-co...

Posted by Emerald Chickad... on Mon, 07/01/2013 - 17:01
Again, a very well done

Again, a very well done review, Abbey. I'm impressed.

 

Read Lydia's story, Life against death! (It's REALLY good... I command you to.) http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/untitled-story-prolouge-20811...

Posted by Dayborn (*Jill*) on Tue, 07/02/2013 - 01:12
Thanks! :) Please enter

Thanks! :)

Please enter Gemstone Writer, my very own annual writing contest! http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/1st-annual-gemstone-writer-co...

Posted by Emerald Chickad... on Tue, 07/02/2013 - 07:37
Why not?   Read Lydia's

Why not?

 

Read Lydia's story, Life against death! (It's REALLY good... I command you to.) http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/untitled-story-prolouge-20811...

Posted by Dayborn (*Jill*) on Tue, 07/02/2013 - 09:06

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