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Untitled Story

Untitled Story

Posted December 1st, 2012 by BriannaH

A Book Review by Abbey
in lost in the world of YA

Author: 
Lydia
Rating: 
5

This story is amazing in every way. The plot, the suspense, the description, the characters... Everything is great. 

It's about three races: the humans, the Huciy, and the Miliciy. The Miliciy realize that there's a problem that they have to fix. They also realize that there will be consequences if they don't fix it. The Miliciy want to overthrow the human leader, Jinner, and are secretly plotting to overthrow their current leader, Huggun, as well. Five boys and five girls volunteer. The girls are training to stop Jinner, but the boys are secretly training as well. But Jinner has a spy among the girls... What will happen?

It's well-paced, so the story doesn't go by really fast or really slow. There's a fair amount of suspense and a couple of unexpected twists, which makes it even more interesting. Everything is described really well. The entire time I was reading, there was a vivid picture painted in my head.  

The characters are a whole different story. All of them are so realistic and well-structured. I really like the characters and almost feel as if they were living people. 

I would strongly recommend this story to everyone. If you want to read it, here's a link to the prologue. http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/untitled-story-prolouge-2081129550

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I really think that you should publish this, Lydia, because, like I already said, this story is amazing. 

 


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Lydia, I'm sorry this took

Lydia, I'm sorry this took so long to do. I hope you like it!

Also, this has nothing to do with the book review, but for the other winner of my Thanksgiving contest, Chloe, if you read this, please tell me what you'd like your prizes to be. In case you don't know what you won, here's a link to the results. http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/contest-results-1734131206

I lost the Game!

Posted by PrimEverdeen (A... on Sat, 12/01/2012 - 16:55
You didn't take too long.

You didn't take too long. It's fine. :)

 

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My sig! Check out this stuff:

My Untitled Story: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/untitled-story-prolouge-20811...

Jace X. Ander's Clogging Notice: http://www.kidpub.com/story/call-attention-notice-about-clogging-7981302...

~~Lydia~~

Posted by Lydia on Sat, 12/01/2012 - 19:19
Thank you so much!!! It

Thank you so much!!! It really means a lot that you wrote this and gave it this great review!

I can't say how much this means to me! Okay, here is my attempt:

You ->angel            Me ->blush  THANK YOU!!!

 

I might publish it... My dad said maybe after I revised it and stuff. :D

And I should have the next chapter out soon... :)

 

 

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My sig! Check out this stuff:

My Untitled Story: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/untitled-story-prolouge-20811...

Jace X. Ander's Clogging Notice: http://www.kidpub.com/story/call-attention-notice-about-clogging-7981302...

~~Lydia~~

Posted by Lydia on Sat, 12/01/2012 - 19:18
I'm glad you like it. And it

I'm glad you like it. And it really is a great story. If it ever gets published, I'm definitely buying it!

I lost the Game!

Posted by PrimEverdeen (A... on Sat, 12/01/2012 - 19:48
Thank you! And I'll let you

Thank you! And I'll let you know if I do publish it!

 

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My sig! Check out this stuff:

My Untitled Story: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/untitled-story-prolouge-20811...

Jace X. Ander's Clogging Notice: http://www.kidpub.com/story/call-attention-notice-about-clogging-7981302...

~~Lydia~~

Posted by Lydia on Sat, 12/01/2012 - 20:15

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