Posted December 1st, 2012 by BriannaH
A Book Review by Abbey
in lost in the world of YA
This story is amazing in every way. The plot, the suspense, the description, the characters... Everything is great.
It's about three races: the humans, the Huciy, and the Miliciy. The Miliciy realize that there's a problem that they have to fix. They also realize that there will be consequences if they don't fix it. The Miliciy want to overthrow the human leader, Jinner, and are secretly plotting to overthrow their current leader, Huggun, as well. Five boys and five girls volunteer. The girls are training to stop Jinner, but the boys are secretly training as well. But Jinner has a spy among the girls... What will happen?
It's well-paced, so the story doesn't go by really fast or really slow. There's a fair amount of suspense and a couple of unexpected twists, which makes it even more interesting. Everything is described really well. The entire time I was reading, there was a vivid picture painted in my head.
The characters are a whole different story. All of them are so realistic and well-structured. I really like the characters and almost feel as if they were living people.
I would strongly recommend this story to everyone. If you want to read it, here's a link to the prologue. http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-chapter/untitled-story-prolouge-2081129550
I really think that you should publish this, Lydia, because, like I already said, this story is amazing.
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