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saphiremoon 09-21-2014 10:44 AM

it's my mum's birthday so i don't have time to rant right now

but i'd just like to say that this pretty much sums up luana and emmery's relationship across the entire trilogy

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0BHBjWttvO4

rebecca 09-21-2014 11:15 AM

Damn, my latest story got no comments again. Still going to post it.
Need to work on the title. I'm thinking of just calling it Demonica or something.

But yeah, the characters go through hell. Literally. No, they literally go through the real hell, and out again. It's got demons, angels who didn't so much as fall as get pushed, and let's just say Antoinette Chives is a right bundle of laughs and sunshine. She doesn't at all kill people with her mind. NONE OF THAT WHATSOEVER. NO LESBIANS EITHER. NONE. NOTHING LIKE THAT. It's a lovely happy-go-lucky tale of heterosexuality. NO MAIN CHARACTERS WILL DIE. YOU WON'T HATE ME FOR WRITING IT.

http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...one-1789151174

Off to work on chapter three.

saphiremoon 09-21-2014 01:42 PM

does anyone else absolutely love the 'oh fuck' moments in your books

i have way too much fun with them

rebecca 09-21-2014 02:01 PM

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Originally Posted by saphiremoon (Post 559905)
does anyone else absolutely love the 'oh fuck' moments in your books

i have way too much fun with them

Same. I love screwing my characters over. Poor likkle Ianthe will always get a bad deal. Her on-and-off girlfriend is a compulsive liar who keeps secrets from her as a matter of course, and when those secrets get out...'oh fuck' indeed.

saphiremoon 09-21-2014 02:13 PM

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Originally Posted by rebecca (Post 559906)
Same. I love screwing my characters over. Poor likkle Ianthe will always get a bad deal. Her on-and-off girlfriend is a compulsive liar who keeps secrets from her as a matter of course, and when those secrets get out...'oh fuck' indeed.

revealed secrets are excellent 'oh fuck' moments (especially when it's done by an on-and-off girlfriend who's a compulsive liar) (also I've read some of your Demonica book and enjoyed it– I'd say one of the only reasons you're not getting comments is because it might be a little bit mature for KP. as great as this website is, I don't think everyone on here can appreciate the ingenuity of Demonic Compulsive Disorder. keep posting, though– I'll definitely comment when I get the time to sit down and read it properly)

rebecca 09-21-2014 02:27 PM

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Originally Posted by saphiremoon (Post 559908)
revealed secrets are excellent 'oh fuck' moments (especially when it's done by an on-and-off girlfriend who's a compulsive liar) (also I've read some of your Demonica book and enjoyed it– I'd say one of the only reasons you're not getting comments is because it might be a little bit mature for KP. as great as this website is, I don't think everyone on here can appreciate the ingenuity of Demonic Compulsive Disorder. keep posting, though– I'll definitely comment when I get the time to sit down and read it properly)

Yeah, probably.
I guess I'm just growing up.
I'VE OUTGROWN KP WHAT DO I DO HELP ME!

saphiremoon 09-21-2014 02:38 PM

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Originally Posted by rebecca (Post 559909)
Yeah, probably.
I guess I'm just growing up.
I'VE OUTGROWN KP WHAT DO I DO HELP ME!

get a higher roof? (*coughs*)
idek i wish there was something like 'teenpub' or 'youngadultwriterspub'. a lot of good authors on here have outgrown kp, but we all still want to be in a writing community... maybe some of us should make a group thing and become each others beta readers?

rebecca 09-21-2014 02:44 PM

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Originally Posted by saphiremoon (Post 559910)
get a higher roof? (*coughs*)
idek i wish there was something like 'teenpub' or 'youngadultwriterspub'. a lot of good authors on here have outgrown kp, but we all still want to be in a writing community... maybe some of us should make a group thing and become each others beta readers?

Yeah, sounds like a good idea.
We should totally do that.

(When you've got time, I'd like some CC for Demonica because you know, I'm a little unsure about it at times)

SilverMoon 09-21-2014 04:10 PM

Mind-mapping my six projects. Actually making some progress. I feel relatively productive.

rebecca 09-21-2014 05:05 PM

We really do need a teenage section. We can't just graduate immediately into adulthood, it wouldn't work.

So what do we do now then?



Update: Next chapter in the pipeline, from darling Pablo's perspective. He's such a nice fellow. Aside from the frogs, and he can hardly help that, can he now?


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