also i'll be posting like 3 poems tomorrow and ttt chapter 3 on Monday or at least sometime in the week

Read my thing, it was due on Thursday but I got an extension until tonight and didn't start it until yesterday afternoon.
http://www.kidpub.com/story/not-tonight-671153317

Martin's being stupid and stupid isn't being Martina and Idek.

I think that chapter 5 of TTT will end just before Sanna undergoes the power-unlocking process

I wILL post a bunch of crap this weekend ok

also I've been thinking about natural forces subplots and character arcs and such & it's fun
I know that the twilight will probably get their own subplot and chapters from their povs and such because I really like my antagonists
and my protags

also I've been thinking about my manga idea too

ok i need help? :D
do you guys think like a kind of choppy writing style with the protagonist thinking on the page is ok?

this is an excerpt:
Her eyes flew open. That… would that implicate Jay? Did Jay turn into a werewolf too? But even as she frantically searched the page-long account, she knew she was the only one affected. Jay… Jay hadn’t taken a blue pill, had he? She flicked back to the afternoon of the day before. She could see it clearly now: his fingers steady as he held a light purple tablet, the bag full of a rainbow of hues: she’d noticed red, orange, green, pink and a mottled grey, to name a few, but of course she was unlucky enough to choose the one color that’d turn her into a werewolf—

“Would Jay really inform the authorities?” she whispered, her entire body trembling now
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For the first time since she’d woken up, she felt thoroughly defeated, all of the explosive energy and vitality from the full moon drained from her veins.

But she couldn’t count on Jay, Jay who was high all the time and didn’t remember half the things he said—Jay… Jay wouldn’t be an ally in this game.

Which meant…

She abruptly stood, ignoring the sharp looks cast her way by the surrounding people who had previously been pretending not to be heckling her. My family is in danger. Or they would be, if Jay had told on me. They could be under questioning right now—they could be walking to their deaths right now— She nearly took off in a run, but something stopped her, and for once she was mindful of the slow, steady voice in the back of her head.


soooo? it's really choppy and i overuse em dashes so idk? advice, comments, anything?

http://www.kidpub.com/story/hey-guys...ook-1857153469


GUYS GUYS GUYS


oh also goddammit hamlet you're a brat

i AM A TERRIBLE AUTHOR OH MY GOD WHY CAN I NOT FOCUS AND JUST WRITE

*bawls*

at this point i frigging hate my book

but i will still advertise it shamelessly

http://www.doubtthoubook.weebly.com

so I have to write a short story for English class (in two days yay *dies*) and it has to be a ghost story and I just finished plotting it and I'm sorta crying now bc it's so effing depressing
I mean the protagonist(s) die in almost all my stories but this
this is different
I am truly fucked up
(*cries*)
((it also doesn't help that 'let her go' by passenger just came on which I guess could kinda be the main secondary character's theme and yeah I'm just going to stop now because I think I'll sob))