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Panthera 11-01-2014 09:16 AM

Honest CC
 
Hello.
And yes, I already know that something like this has already been done.
Well, I'm doing it too.
Anyway, all I'm asking is that people give me a link to their story, and I shall review it. I'll be posting all reviews on the Kidpub website, but when it is done I shall also post a link here. Stories are reviewed on a first come, first serve status.
DISCLAIMERS:
-I'm going to be honest. This means I WILL NOT SUGAR COAT THINGS. I will try to sound polite, but straight forward.
-I do not want to come off as mean or cruel. If you submit your story, you accept that I WILL be as honest as possible.
-I WILL try to keep personal opinions out of your review. At the end, I may make a quick comment about my opinions, but I want to stay honest.
-I WILL NOT FLAME. Again, I want to be honest, but not rude. If you think I sound cruel, mean, or biased, I will re-write your review.
-REVIEWS MAY TAKE SOME TIME. Please, be patient. I WILL TELL YOU WHEN YOUR REVIEW IS DONE.
That is all.
Thank you,
Panthera

rebecca 11-01-2014 10:06 AM

Ooh, interesting.
This is nice. Gives me a break, for once.

There is some bad language in this story, if that kind of thing offends you, also religious elements, but you seem articulate enough so go ahead. There are five chapters out.

http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...one-1789151174

Panthera 11-01-2014 10:38 AM

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Originally Posted by rebecca (Post 561616)
Ooh, interesting.
This is nice. Gives me a break, for once.

There is some bad language in this story, if that kind of thing offends you, also religious elements, but you seem articulate enough so go ahead. There are five chapters out.

http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...one-1789151174

Fine by me. Do you want one review with a collection of smaller reviews for each chapter, or one large review covering the entire book?

rebecca 11-02-2014 11:41 AM

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Originally Posted by Panthera (Post 561618)
Fine by me. Do you want one review with a collection of smaller reviews for each chapter, or one large review covering the entire book?

Large review covering everything.
I find it easier to review longer sections myself, more content.

rebecca 11-23-2014 11:47 AM

Sorry, I just posted another chapter. Had to make your job harder.

Panthera 12-03-2014 07:09 PM

It's fine, don't worry. I should be done soon.

Panthera 12-06-2014 11:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by rebecca (Post 561616)
Ooh, interesting.
This is nice. Gives me a break, for once.

There is some bad language in this story, if that kind of thing offends you, also religious elements, but you seem articulate enough so go ahead. There are five chapters out.

http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...one-1789151174

I'm done! I enjoyed your story and writing your review.
Here's the link:
http://www.kidpub.com/book-review/ho...ica-2286152478

strawberry 12-06-2014 11:44 AM

http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...efinaldraftguy

havent written since forever but i usually just pick this story up every year so id like to see what you think of it
(might contain high school chiches because i wrote this before attending an actual high school myself and now i know xp)

but yeah it'd mean a lot if you reviewed this. be as critical as possible and go crazy ^u^

Panthera 12-06-2014 10:18 PM

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Originally Posted by strawberry (Post 562583)
http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...efinaldraftguy

havent written since forever but i usually just pick this story up every year so id like to see what you think of it
(might contain high school chiches because i wrote this before attending an actual high school myself and now i know xp)

but yeah it'd mean a lot if you reviewed this. be as critical as possible and go crazy ^u^

Again, do you want one long review or a review split up into smaller sections for each chapter?

strawberry 12-07-2014 11:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Panthera (Post 562595)
Again, do you want one long review or a review split up into smaller sections for each chapter?

um go with what you think is easier or more detailed. i don't have a preference


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