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AlgebraAddict 12-16-2012 11:12 AM

It snowed last night, and no one saw it but me. I went outside, into the neighborhood, where I wasn't supposed to go. I ate the snow and I sang. It was magical, and it turned into sloppy rain by morning. I was the only one to see it, at midnight. I saw it. No one else did. All those people who study snow in southern states and all those little toddlers in big clomp boots never got into my snow. My little peice of magic. A barefoot girl in sweatpants bested them all.

People can attack me and conquer me for anything they want, but some things are mine.

Ruza 12-16-2012 11:29 AM

I had to write an acrostic poem for school, so I made it as ridiculous as I could while still staying in the guidelines. *ahem*:

Mature poetry graces the page

An impeccable parakeet escapes from its cage

Little children warm up by the stove

And dolphins cry in the salty cove

Robust antelopes run from fate

Kleptomaniac kittens are used as bait

Excitable pandas sip on tea

Young wolves slowly dive into the sea

soph-soph27 12-16-2012 11:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ruza (Post 378183)
I had to write an acrostic poem for school, so I made it as ridiculous as I could while still staying in the guidelines. *ahem*:

Mature poetry graces the page

An impeccable parakeet escapes from its cage

Little children warm up by the stove

And dolphins cry in the salty cove

Robust antelopes run from fate

Kleptomaniac kittens are used as bait

Excitable pandas sip on tea

Young wolves slowly dive into the sea

Favorite lines: Ones in bold.

It makes sense, since the word that you had to used to make the acrostic means meaningless chatter, or talk.

wildwolf 12-16-2012 03:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ruza (Post 378183)
I had to write an acrostic poem for school, so I made it as ridiculous as I could while still staying in the guidelines. *ahem*:

Mature poetry graces the page

An impeccable parakeet escapes from its cage

Little children warm up by the stove

And dolphins cry in the salty cove

Robust antelopes run from fate

Kleptomaniac kittens are used as bait

Excitable pandas sip on tea

Young wolves slowly dive into the sea

That's pretty genius.
I really like the last two lines.

CACrools 12-16-2012 03:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ruza (Post 378183)
I had to write an acrostic poem for school, so I made it as ridiculous as I could while still staying in the guidelines. *ahem*:

Mature poetry graces the page

An impeccable parakeet escapes from its cage

Little children warm up by the stove

And dolphins cry in the salty cove

Robust antelopes run from fate

Kleptomaniac kittens are used as bait

Excitable pandas sip on tea

Young wolves slowly dive into the sea

I like it. (on a completely random note, congrats for getting the 5000th post :D)

GabiDi 12-16-2012 03:20 PM

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Originally Posted by AlgebraAddict (Post 378179)
It snowed last night, and no one saw it but me. I went outside, into the neighborhood, where I wasn't supposed to go. I ate the snow and I sang. It was magical, and it turned into sloppy rain by morning. I was the only one to see it, at midnight. I saw it. No one else did. All those people who study snow in southern states and all those little toddlers in big clomp boots never got into my snow. My little peice of magic. A barefoot girl in sweatpants bested them all.

People can attack me and conquer me for anything they want, but some things are mine.

I don't know why I love this so much... maybe because I want that all the time, maybe because you perfectly described how I feel every day when I just feel so isolated... but in a good way...
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Thank you AA.

Tiresomehoopla 12-16-2012 03:58 PM

I hate nosy first graders -_-

Seriously, some people need to mind their own business.

GabiDi 12-16-2012 04:06 PM

Haha, what'd they do?

maxi 12-16-2012 04:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Tiresomehoopla (Post 378313)
I hate nosy first graders -_-

Seriously, some people need to mind their own business.

*_* I LOVE where this is going. (*props hand under chin*) Carry on like we aren't here...

Owen-L 12-16-2012 04:11 PM

Why must I go to a school where 95% of the people there are disgusting, horrible, idiots. And by 95% I MEAN 95%. Even most of the older kids are complete morons. -_- ffs. Why?


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