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the last time i actually started a story besides this was like four years ago and now im wondering how i did it also i really shouldnt plan trilogies every time i get inspiration for a book even if i have reasonable amount of ideas because it just....will never happen |
To be honest, it's very easy for me to start a beginning but I can't write an ending. Nikki, have you planned your ending yet?
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In my book, I really like the beginning, and I really like the end. But the middle is just full of character development and advancing farther in war. It's not super exciting xD any advice?
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i will get stuck on a chapter for like half a year and I'll start it over like a dozen times and I can't ever get it right and then I start something else to get my mind off of it and I have the same problem afglkhdgdglkjdhf |
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my advice (might suck but) is to maybe add in minor subplots that dont have too much of an impact to the main plot but add excitement and stuff?? like, with me and this new story im writing, theres like a sketchy school and no one finds out about its true plans (which is basically the whole plot of my novel) till the very end, but i tried to add in stuff like drama and small issues that the characters have to deal with to fill it up. so yeah, minor subplots. :3 |
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usually i rewrite because my writing has gotten better over time and i look back at my old work and go "ew this is crap" but the worst is when stuff goes missing or i realize that the way i portrayed modern high school was incredibly cliche (in my defense i hadnt ever gone to high school in the US so all i had to draw from was movies and other books xDD) but yeah it really sucks /tearfully glomps/ u understand the pain |
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For me, I find beginnings the hardest. And middles. And endings. |
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From my own brain, though (and not fabulous writing articles above), try to add in a Midpoint Reversal. It's common in almost every Western culture plotting guide I've seen, and it really, really makes the middle easier. What it is is a revelation, or event, or anything that sends the story completely sideways. A twist, I guess– but a twist you plan, which coincides with your character arc and main plot, and really shakes the story up. Not only does it make the story more exciting and predictable, but it also gives you something to write towards (which is really, really useful in the middle, which is supposed to take up 50% of the story and can make you feel very lost). Also, pinch points are useful; they're problems/snags in the protagonist's plan that occur at the 33% and 67% mark (ish). They're just conflicts, sometimes subplot-related, that demonstrate the antagonist's power, and remind the protagonist (and readers) about what he's fighting. |
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