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Keegan 10-19-2011 11:33 PM

The woods
 
Okay I'm making a book about a kid that goes into the woods, i thought that we could make a nes. so this nes is about a bunch of kids who go into the woods and try to survive.

Rules


(1)No killing other character without permission.
(2)2 character at most.
(3)you can up to 4 tools

Name:
Personality:
Appearance:
Gender:
Tool:


Here is my
Name:Leigh
Personality:smart, intelligent not shy
Appearance:has brown eyes brown hair. were's a brown leather coat has jeans.
Gender:Male
Tool: knife, flint and steal

JennyC 10-21-2011 01:25 PM

Name: Dylan
Personality: Cool, popular, can be a total jerk.
Appearance: Dark hair, styled. Brown eyes, slightly tanned skin.
Gender: Male
Tool: knife

Is open for romance.

Keegan 10-21-2011 02:17 PM

hmm we need more characters

Jack 10-21-2011 03:53 PM

Name:Billy but all his friends call him Bronko
Personality:Funny,Happy,loves to fight.
Appearance: auburn hair, blueish green eyes, is on the shorter side, wears jean jackets and cargo pants.
Gender:Male
Tool:Machete

AlgebraAddict 10-21-2011 03:58 PM

Name: Winowa
Personality: Gets excited easily, humorous, quippy, likes fighting, has a weird desire to kill things sometimes
Appearance: Short, medium brown hair
Gender: female
Tool: Long sword
Anything else: is blind

Keegan 10-21-2011 08:21 PM

is there enough people to start this nes?

JennyC 10-22-2011 07:30 AM

I guess so people can always join after we start :D

Jack 10-22-2011 10:10 AM

Billy wondered out onto the soccer field and sat down on the grass, this is were they said they would meet me he thought

Keegan 10-22-2011 11:29 AM

Leigh wonder over to were billy was sitting, and started to wait for the others.

magsiscool 10-23-2011 11:47 AM

Name: Maggie (Margaret)
Personality: sweet and funny and is constantly writing (Plays gutair) and a bit michiveous
Appearance:Brown shoulder length hair and brown eyes. About 5'1
Gender:femalew
Tool: traps and bow&arrow

magsiscool 10-23-2011 11:51 AM

Maggie walked across the soccar field to where the boys were sitting. She pulled her backpack of her back and pulled her notebook out. She started to avidly writie.

AlgebraAddict 10-23-2011 11:52 AM

Winowa heard a deer coming.

"Ah," she said to herself, crouching in the brush. She felt the warmth of it's body as it drew nearer. And then, she drew her sword and dove it into the warmth. That would be her twentieth deer that she had killed
this year. She was blind, but she was not helpless. She cleaned her sword and put it back into her sheath, and then she ran quickly through the forest looking for others to help her bring the deer away.

magsiscool 10-23-2011 11:56 AM

Maggie scanned the horizon for more people to come. When no one shoed up she went back to sketching.

Jack 10-23-2011 12:03 PM

Billy got up "I think we should begin this meeting now" he looked around "looks like nobody else will show up"

magsiscool 10-23-2011 12:04 PM

"Ok so what?" Maggie asked. She was still confused why she wasted a perfectly good saturday to come to this "Meeting".

Jack 10-23-2011 12:08 PM

"as you know, there has been quite allot of bombings in our area, and it won't be long until we are bombed very badly" Billy took a breath "We need to leave" he said strongly

magsiscool 10-23-2011 12:11 PM

"Yeah but where are we going to go?" Maggie asked. She often thought the boys had crazy ideas that would never work.

Keegan 10-23-2011 12:12 PM

leith listened to billy's words, and said "I agree with you billy" "and we should leave tomorrow morning"

Jack 10-23-2011 12:13 PM

Billy looked up at the towering mountains "my mother and father think we should go there"

magsiscool 10-23-2011 12:13 PM

"WHERE THE HECK ARE WE GOING?" Maggie yelled. The boys looked at her. Her face turned red.

Jack 10-23-2011 12:15 PM

Billy looked at Maggie "I just told you"

magsiscool 10-23-2011 12:16 PM

"Wait were just GOING!"Maggie said. "Ok when are we going and can i run home and pack?"

Keegan 10-23-2011 12:17 PM

"sure I need to get my to"

magsiscool 10-23-2011 12:18 PM

" When are we going? TONIGHT?" Maggie asked.

Jack 10-23-2011 12:20 PM

"We will need time to pack" Billy pondered "and we need to try and convince as many people as we can to come with us"

Jack 10-23-2011 12:21 PM

Billy though for awhile "tomorrow morning, while its still dark"

Keegan 10-23-2011 12:22 PM

leith ran back to his house, walked in went to his room, grabbed his flint & steal and his knife which blade was 11.5 inches.

magsiscool 10-23-2011 12:25 PM

Maggie ran home and pulled her trap kit in her bag. She grabbed some clothes and some soap and stuff. Finally she stuck her bow and arrow in her bag.

JennyC 10-23-2011 05:28 PM

"Crap," Dylan muttered jogging thought the streets. The cold air made his lungs feel frozen and he found it hard to breath. When he turned up at the field everyone was gone. He bang his fist into his cupped hand and took out his cell. "Leigh?" he called, panting. "Where are you all?"

Keegan 10-23-2011 07:50 PM

Leigh heard is phone ringing, he picked it up and answered and dylan said "hello Leigh where are you all" the I replied "Oh you just missed the meeting we are going to go up the mountain" "tomorrow morning when its still dark" then dylan "okay thanks bye" i replied "bye"

Jack 10-23-2011 07:52 PM

Billy walked home slowly thinking over their plans, when he reached his house his mother and father greeted him "how did it go?" his mother asked Billy nodded "Lieth and Maggie decided they would go" then he looked up at them "why won't you come with us?" "we have to stay here" his father answered "we are to old to travel" tears weld up in Billy's eyes "your only 50" he pointed out, his mother shook her head "we need you to be strong, and take care of the people who come with you" Billy nodded and walked over the shed he dug out a 15 inch machete, and thrust it into his belt, then packed a bag with a few shirts and pants, plus a couple pocket knives and enough food to last him a few days.

magsiscool 10-23-2011 07:52 PM

Maggie ate dinner nervously. She made sure to give extra hugs when it was time for bed. That night she lay trying to enjoy th last time she laid in that bed.

Keegan 10-23-2011 08:02 PM

leigh walked up the stairs into his bedroom, got in his bed and slept.

Jack 10-23-2011 08:50 PM

Billy walked down the street, looking for people that he might be able to get to join them he spotted Winowa walking around with a bloody sword in her hand

JennyC 10-24-2011 02:36 PM

Dylan shuffled inside and banged the door shut. He strolled into the kitchen to find his mother welling with tears. Dylan folded his arms and tried a smile. His mother smiled back trying to be strong for him. Neither said a word that night. But Dylan could hear the thought in his mothers head. If only your father was here to see you now. Dylan packed for the journey, slipping a pocket knife into his belt. He hugged his mother in his bedroom doorway and when the finally parted, closed the door and went lay in his bed. He didn't sleep one bit that night...

AlgebraAddict 10-24-2011 02:59 PM

"Oh," said Winowa, "Hello Billy. I've got a dead deer in the woods; I can't drag it all the way over here."

*Pssst... I cleaned my sword. :p*

Jack 10-24-2011 03:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AlgebraAddict (Post 200897)
"Oh," said Winowa, "Hello Billy. I've got a dead deer in the woods; I can't drag it all the way over here."

*Pssst... I cleaned my sword. :p*

"I can't help right now.........." he trailed off not sure what to say "ummmm, Me Liegh and Maggie are leaving" he said finally "Our parents want us to, they think there is going to be a big bombing soon"

AlgebraAddict 10-24-2011 04:15 PM

"Oh," said Winowa, "In that case, we're going to have to leave it to the falcons. I'll be glad to leave the home for mentally and/or physically disabled young girls and come along, away from this place. When is everyone leaving?"

Jack 10-24-2011 05:43 PM

"the falcons?" Billy asked dumbfounded "we are leaving tomorrow morning, while its still dark"

AlgebraAddict 10-26-2011 07:16 PM

"Oh," said Winowa. "I'll get my swordstick."

*a swordstick is a sword disguised inside a walking stick*


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